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Pleasures of Moving on Moon

Pleasures of Moving on Moon You have always charmed us by your beauty, O Moon, Sometimes fascinating Heer and Ranjha*, and sometimes, Mesmerizing Romeo and Juliet. Sometimes you have spread your charms, on the monuments of Love, Alluring the beauty of Taj*, in the full moon light of Purnamasi* O, Moon how many faces of Love and Beauty you have, When you stroll silently on a snow covered maintain, The beauty and your grandeur becomes envy for the heaven. For Poets and Writers you have immense stories and inspirations, For Lovers you are more precious than gold and diamond, For singers you are like the soul of their songs, For Boatman’s, you are their sole companion of their silence and turbulence. While watching you so intensely from earth, I felt, as if I was wondering on the silver surface of you O, Moon, Moving and feeling, no gush of wind, No moisture of Rains and dryness of Sun, No falling of leaves, in the season of Autumn, No bending of rivers, flowing from mountains to oceans No murmuring of birds while mating and chatting, No change of seasons to engage my mind and heart, Still I was fascinating to move on the silver surface of you, O Moon. Walking on your surface was a strange experience for me O, dear Moon, As I was trying to feel the unique pleasures of earth, While moving on your silvr surface, O Moon. Ravindra Kanpur India 22nd November 2010 Soon I will post this as My Photo Poem with the Photograph of Moon on my Blog and on face book, which I took on 22nd Nov. 2010 • Heer and Rangha. The Indian Lovers like Romeo and Juliet • Purnamasi. The Day as per Indian calendar, when we can see the full Moon. • Taj. Refers to the world famous Taj Mehal monument of Agra, India.

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Date: 9/28/2011 9:51:00 PM
Cool and elegant message . Sings like a song of nature.
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Date: 11/29/2010 5:17:00 AM
Hope all is well with u Ravindra my friend and are enjoying your life with lots of luv and poetry ..
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Date: 11/24/2010 1:13:00 PM
This is really well written, Ravindra. I like the way you describe all of the things we associate with the moon while telling us something about India's culture too. Best to you, Diane
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Date: 11/24/2010 11:37:00 AM
beautiful write,I love the third stanza.Written with passion and emotion.A elegant image and a nice introspective of your views of the beautiful moon.great write my friends.Love,jamecia
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Date: 11/24/2010 11:07:00 AM
What a wonderful tribute to the eternal symbol that guides sailors and makes lovers' hearts beat faster, Ravindra!! I appreciate the way you share your culture with us; I'd never heard of Heer and Rangha or knew they were lovers like Romeo and Juliet. I recall Juliet asking Romeo not to pledge his love by the "inconstant" move which changes shapes and sometimes disappears. A favorite for me, my friend. Wishing you peace and blessings. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/22/2010 9:16:00 PM
Very interesting and beautiful poem you have created. I like how you end it by saying you were trying to feel unique pleasures of earth while moving to the moon. I bet it will look great on your blog! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/22/2010 4:34:00 PM
wow! Ravindra,, i love this new poem you have here,, I hope I have not missed much of your poetry.. I do remember yo saying you would be out for a bit,, A for me,,i only come here to check out my comments,, And i was smiling when I finally heard from you! By the way,, I love the young love couple here. (silver surface ), that is the true beauty of our moving moon,, Love it ,, Adding this to my favorites,, Thank you,..POET D.
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Date: 11/22/2010 9:49:00 AM
Smile ~ I find a true beauty inside of "Your Beautiful Soul" amid this magnificently painted verse my dear friend; so very soft & lovely this portrait is; a reflection of a jewel deep inside of "Your Precious Heart" I believe; a fave as "You Yourself;" spectacular & bright, indeed!!! ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours,' Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day Amid, 'Creations Glowing Moons, Radiance of Heavenly Love;'" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 11/22/2010 7:39:00 AM
How lovely this ode to the moon, mezmorizing and hypnotic as we sit beneath her light and dream of someday knowing more of this mysterious place in space. I will love seeing the photograph you choose to go with this wonderful poem. It has a song like quality!
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Date: 11/22/2010 7:02:00 AM
You have captured Jove's treasure! The moon has radiated it's essential essence to you! Enjoyed your soliloquy! I have written a couple of sequels. If you wish to view them feel free! Stephen Parker a102866
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Date: 11/22/2010 4:52:00 AM
O Ravindra this is a super spectacular poem my friend.. such eloquent lines speaking to the Moon and wonderful words of expression ... A good idea if Science finds a way to have trips to the Moon .. might just want to stay there if possible.. u words make it so inviting my friend.. may u and yours enjoy a Happy Thanksgiving ...with luv..
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Date: 11/22/2010 3:07:00 AM
Good Morning/Evening to all my Poetry Soup friends. In the last few days I was away from Kanpur and could not post any comment and Poems. I shall be reaching to all my favorite Poets soon. Have a nice time .........Ravindra
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