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Pleasure Is Passion

I cant fight this Sets me reeling everytime Curls my toes Flotas my boat Sends chills down my spine I want to hold onto this Im gonna never let it go To stay like this forever? You wouldnt dare say no No need to be ashamed I enjoy it just like you, Just wallow in the way this feels Theres still so much more to do Its a little much but dont be shy I aim to please To make sure you cry And cringe And squirm Yet beg for more Dont worry Dnt wonder Cuz I'm gonna make you sure But after this You'll never leave Cuz you cant touch What you cant see I see you but I dont feel I told you this aint real it's just a game It's purely pleasure I dnt see love I'll never touch it aint that a shame

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Honestly J.T.

Date: 11/5/2013 11:03:00 AM

You indeed do aim to please. Good job

Shawn Munoz

Date: 11/4/2013 5:51:00 PM

Lmao i like this one.

Joanna Smith
Date: 11/4/2013 6:16:00 PM

Thankyou. And I am glad you decided to read it.

Terry O'Leary

Date: 11/4/2013 1:45:00 PM

and passion a pipe dream???... Nice poem... Terry

Joanna Smith
Date: 11/4/2013 6:15:00 PM

Thats right. Pleasure is as close as you'll get if you ask me! Thanks for stopping to give this a read.

Jennifer Perry

Date: 4/4/2013 6:30:00 PM

Yea! :)

Joanna Smith
Date: 11/4/2013 6:21:00 PM

Thankyou :)

Daver Austin

Date: 3/28/2013 10:24:00 AM

The illusive love. If you think you are in love, you aint. Good stuff, joanna. daver

Joanna Smith
Date: 11/4/2013 6:20:00 PM

Thanks for the compliment and for understanding the poetry here. I thought it might be confusing when I originally posted it but you got it!

Richard D Seal

Date: 3/27/2013 6:39:00 PM

Hi Joanna, I only found you because you left a comment on mine, thank you for that. I see your a writer of dark poetry, I like that very much and have been through all your writes. You are very good and I hope you'll post more. Take care, Regards Richard

Joanna Smith
Date: 11/4/2013 6:24:00 PM

Thankyou very much. I have always considered myself mediocre because of my limited education of poetry and form but I write what comes to my mind and my heart and am flattered to think that anyone would read all of my poetry. That is very encouraging for me just soyou know.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2013 12:10:00 AM

that is what passion feels like. You said it!!!

Joanna Smith
Date: 11/4/2013 6:24:00 PM

Thanks for reading

Red Omara

Date: 3/26/2013 6:17:00 AM

I only dropped by to thank you for the comments you've left me. And I found this. Passionate piece of writing, Joanna. But is the ending less than happy?

Joanna Smith
Date: 11/4/2013 6:26:00 PM

No not less than happy just a little sarcastic, which speaks of my personality. Thankyou for taking the time out to read my writing and sorry I never responded until now.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 3/26/2013 3:27:00 AM

Wow a cool songlike poem i enjoyd. Im an indian.

Joanna Smith
Date: 11/4/2013 6:28:00 PM

Why thankyou. I wouldnt say I have ever written a poemquite like this but friends have been encouraging me to write songs so it's good that you would describe this as song like. Thankyou for reading.