Joanna Smith Poet Rhyme

Pleasure Is Passion

I cant fight this
Sets me reeling everytime
Curls my toes
Flotas my boat
Sends chills down my spine

I want to hold onto this 
Im gonna never let it go
To stay like this forever?
You wouldnt dare say no
 
No need to be ashamed 
I enjoy it just like you,
Just wallow in the way this feels
Theres still so much more to do

Its a little much but dont be shy
I aim to please
To make sure you cry

And cringe
And squirm
Yet beg for more
Dont worry 
Dnt wonder
Cuz I'm gonna make you sure

But after this 
You'll never leave
Cuz you cant touch
What you cant see

I see you but I dont feel
I told you this aint real it's just a game
It's purely pleasure I dnt see love 
I'll never touch it aint that a shame

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Honestly J.T. November 5, 2013 at 11:03 AM You indeed do aim to please. Good job

Shawn Munoz November 4, 2013 at 5:51 PM Lmao i like this one. Joanna Smith November 4, 2013 at 6:16 PM Thankyou. And I am glad you decided to read it.

Terry O'Leary November 4, 2013 at 1:45 PM and passion a pipe dream???... Nice poem... Terry Joanna Smith November 4, 2013 at 6:15 PM Thats right. Pleasure is as close as you'll get if you ask me! Thanks for stopping to give this a read.

Jennifer Perry April 4, 2013 at 6:30 PM Yea! :) Joanna Smith November 4, 2013 at 6:21 PM Thankyou :)

Daver Austin March 28, 2013 at 10:24 AM The illusive love. If you think you are in love, you aint. Good stuff, joanna. daver Joanna Smith November 4, 2013 at 6:20 PM Thanks for the compliment and for understanding the poetry here. I thought it might be confusing when I originally posted it but you got it!

Richard D Seal March 27, 2013 at 6:39 PM Hi Joanna, I only found you because you left a comment on mine, thank you for that. I see your a writer of dark poetry, I like that very much and have been through all your writes. You are very good and I hope you'll post more. Take care, Regards Richard Joanna Smith November 4, 2013 at 6:24 PM Thankyou very much. I have always considered myself mediocre because of my limited education of poetry and form but I write what comes to my mind and my heart and am flattered to think that anyone would read all of my poetry. That is very encouraging for me just soyou know.

Andrea Dietrich March 27, 2013 at 12:10 AM that is what passion feels like. You said it!!! Joanna Smith November 4, 2013 at 6:24 PM Thanks for reading

Red Omara March 26, 2013 at 6:17 AM I only dropped by to thank you for the comments you've left me. And I found this. Passionate piece of writing, Joanna. But is the ending less than happy? Joanna Smith November 4, 2013 at 6:26 PM No not less than happy just a little sarcastic, which speaks of my personality. Thankyou for taking the time out to read my writing and sorry I never responded until now.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri March 26, 2013 at 3:27 AM Wow a cool songlike poem i enjoyd. Im an indian. Joanna Smith November 4, 2013 at 6:28 PM Why thankyou. I wouldnt say I have ever written a poemquite like this but friends have been encouraging me to write songs so it's good that you would describe this as song like. Thankyou for reading.