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Pleasing Sweet With Pleasure Bc

 You, my beloved;
           Stars inspire to sway and move in the day
             Those hours which happiest till our feeble age

  Glimmer of pearls trickle and drip on silk; 
    A rhythmic rouse through billows of cream milk 

  Pendulous amber stipule path, weaving 
    Warm champagne beams, on ruffle berth leaving 

  Darkness of an abandon mid-night moon, 
    Gloom bands standing fields and wood-fill life swoon

     You, my beloved;
           Stars inspire to sway and move in the day
             Those hours which happies till our feeble age

  Fragrant firmament then forgotten ours; 
    Liquescent hands reaching for the fixed stars 

  Curled up to the world's eld averting gaze, 
    To pluck the ripened unearth passion blaze 

  A glitter of amorous scene of warmth 
    Nor fading heaven, wake no bounds fruit worth 


3/8/2020

Poetry Contest: Picture Prompt  
Sponsored by: Brenda Chiri
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Brown Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 3:28 PM
I see a life that had its moments of hope and disappointments.
Watt Avatar
March 12, 2020 at 11:55 PM
"Liquescent hands reaching for the fixed stars". Beautiful and thought provoking throughout, Eve. Congrats on #1 ~ John
Poteet Avatar
March 12, 2020 at 11:04 AM
Excellent, romantic response to the pic. Love the "happies". Loved it and want to congratulate you on your well-deserved first place.
Chiri Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 9:51 PM
Eve I loved this congrats on your top win!:)
La France Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 9:21 AM
Eve, beautifully penned _Constance
Somadas Avatar
March 8, 2020 at 8:28 AM
Beautifully penned especially that repeating lines.. Great entry in the contest Eve.. Good Luck..
Pandit Avatar
March 8, 2020 at 7:43 AM
An enchanting, creative interpretation, Eve--well written for a win.
Trifiatis Avatar
March 8, 2020 at 6:59 AM
Tenderly romantic writing dearest, Eve! Hugs xxx
One Avatar
March 8, 2020 at 6:48 AM
such a lovely romantic poem, Brenda will love this one...
Michael Avatar
March 8, 2020 at 4:45 AM
In my case it already truth...I like the enchantment of the write...
Krutsinger Avatar
March 8, 2020 at 4:44 AM
So delicate, beautiful and sensually done, Eve. Wow!
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