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You, my beloved; Stars inspire to sway and move in the day Those hours which happiest till our feeble age Glimmer of pearls trickle and drip on silk; A rhythmic rouse through billows of cream milk Pendulous amber stipule path, weaving Warm champagne beams, on ruffle berth leaving Darkness of an abandon mid-night moon, Gloom bands standing fields and wood-fill life swoon You, my beloved; Stars inspire to sway and move in the day Those hours which happies till our feeble age Fragrant firmament then forgotten ours; Liquescent hands reaching for the fixed stars Curled up to the world's eld averting gaze, To pluck the ripened unearth passion blaze A glitter of amorous scene of warmth Nor fading heaven, wake no bounds fruit worth 3/8/2020 Poetry Contest: Picture Prompt Sponsored by: Brenda Chiri

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Date: 3/22/2020 3:28:00 PM
I see a life that had its moments of hope and disappointments.
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Date: 3/12/2020 11:55:00 PM
"Liquescent hands reaching for the fixed stars". Beautiful and thought provoking throughout, Eve. Congrats on #1 ~ John
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Date: 3/12/2020 11:04:00 AM
Excellent, romantic response to the pic. Love the "happies". Loved it and want to congratulate you on your well-deserved first place.
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Date: 3/11/2020 9:51:00 PM
Eve I loved this congrats on your top win!:)
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Date: 3/11/2020 9:21:00 AM
Eve, beautifully penned _Constance
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Date: 3/8/2020 8:28:00 AM
Beautifully penned especially that repeating lines.. Great entry in the contest Eve.. Good Luck..
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Date: 3/8/2020 7:43:00 AM
An enchanting, creative interpretation, Eve--well written for a win.
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Date: 3/8/2020 6:59:00 AM
Tenderly romantic writing dearest, Eve! Hugs xxx
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Date: 3/8/2020 6:48:00 AM
such a lovely romantic poem, Brenda will love this one...
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Date: 3/8/2020 4:45:00 AM
In my case it already truth...I like the enchantment of the write...
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Date: 3/8/2020 4:44:00 AM
So delicate, beautiful and sensually done, Eve. Wow!
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