Please Stop Teasing Me

Romantic overtures
like gaudy butterflies 
kissing all blooms 
that come their way,
teasing me, haunting me,
flirting with me
and playing havoc 
with my feelings
 
Are you really harmless?
Is it fatal poison I drink?
I ask for hero worship
I get senseless fiddle-fuddle.
I ask for endearing emotions,
I get teasing quips
and seamy punch lines
that make me feel worthless,
shabby and trivial.
 
I yearn for meaning
I get trivia, empty promises,
like husks of unfertilized corn,
like a rundown house
abandoned even by ghastly ghosts,
or like a hot futile desert 
filled only with smouldering sand,
empty even of a hopeful mirage.
 
Should I be thankful 
that you bestow your love on none,
that you just love to trifle
with every man's heart?
Alas, I love you too much.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Legros Kelley Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 11:27 AM
I've seen it before and told my kids when they came to me when they were young and as yet unmarried "She keeps teasing me..." Or "He makes me so angry with his teasing!" I would nod and often the answer was "He/she likes you!!" That didn't mean they had to accept overtures, but simply take it as a compliment of sorts!
Edmonds  Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 9:54 AM
Some love to tease it’s in their nature, it’s not meant to hurt, but it can get one’s head in a whirl and their heart in a twirl. An enjoyable read Victor… Bless you, Belle
Rodrigues Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 5:09 AM
Great emotions… Romantic overtures like gaudy butterflies. Hugs ~ Kim
Horsman Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 7:26 PM
Wow, this is different, Victor, I Wonder if its the poetry, that blooms here, that teases? The poem, is so emotional and it wields such power, certainly makes the reader, take note. Harry.
Volumes Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 4:35 PM
Victor, remember that women are from Venus, a womanly gesture quite often is to tease. Some women do it with ease, in quite an innocent way. I totally agree with Sunshine, flirting is sometimes taken as teasing. It isn't meant to hurt,, Just Flirt. It can really be saying I am interested in you ! So be happy and to your own heart be true. Warmest wishes Victor, from Wen
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 12:29 PM
Ahhh, the heart of the romantic pining away! Good one, Victor.
Buehler Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 10:40 AM
Teasing can be devastating, especially when it's the one you truly love. The frustration of such a love affair is well portrayed here. :)
Andresen Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 6:59 AM
- some are expert at flirting ... like a game ... she clearly shows that she is interested, Victor :) - hugs
Poet Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 6:44 AM
A one-sided love leaves both parties confused about their position. Maybe it's just a story and not based on anything!
Pandit Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 5:27 AM
Much joy in pursuit and tease--lovely romantic reminiscing, Victor. The ending line says it's love.
George Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 4:13 AM
Even when you know that she is trifling with your feelings, why go after her? Like a man, turn your back on her instead of being Love's captive. ( just teasing ) :)
Kendrick Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 3:23 AM
Well, only time will tell what the end results will be. Some people only love themselves or maybe they really don't even love themselves. I enjoyed reading this my heart is an open book emotive work. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Messina Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 2:43 AM
Did Alfalfa ever get to kiss Darla? Maybe we just need open up a can of spinach... Nicely written, Victor. ~Popeye
Callus Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 1:23 AM
I have read many of your poems, Victor, but this one appeals to me in a special way...and it's gets a FAV from me. ~ Hope you are keeping well, my friend. Regards // paul
Cunningham Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 1:03 AM
Sometimes love can be one sided and you're left wondering exactly where you stand. Tom
M  Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 1:03 AM
Interesting poem Victor….fiction i hope and not a personal experience! Cuddles Debx
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