Please Stop It Hurts

Pain 
Hurt 
Agony
I Love You
You Hurt Me
I don't understand 
You love me
You hate her 
But you still live with her
Why can't you leave and be with me
Be with me 
Love me
Don't hurt me
I can't do this anymore
You're mine not hers
Make her stop
It hurts to see this happening
I don't want to lose you
I can't stand to see you with her
Don't lose me stay with me
It hurts
I'm crying
I'm upset
i love you
Stay with me
Love me
Cherish me
Baby please love me
And don't hurt me
I will always be yours
And you will always be mine
I love you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 11/25/2008 11:23:00 AM
Bryn, why love someone who won't love you back? You deserve better. As soon as you realize that you can't change someone, the better off you will be. Don't settle; move on. True love, the kind that doesn't hurt will find you if you allow it. The poem is sad, but expresses well. (Loose = Lose) also, line 24 needs uppercase I. Thanks for sharing, TOM
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