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Please Stay a Young Girl

I once walked with you on Lombard Steet. Little Maria~with the the western golden sun Highting your long, shiny brunette hair. Your tiny patent, Mary Janes, blessing the San Francisco Streets. It is all now just a foglifter's dream. Dreams past and gone too fast! Now you pat my head and hold my hand. Assuring me my hip will definitely heal. And with me ~ you will always stand. Me, wishing, we were on Lombard Street. Climbing the hills, on Cable Cars laughing. But time has its way with us. Never knowing what's coming our way, A new day, a new surprise! What a daughter, a hundred percenter dream of a woman! You must know by now, Maria, that you are.. My rainbow, twinkling, heavenly star! Twinkle, twinkle, my little Maria. God be with you, wherever you are.... June 14, 2020 10:00 pm PST Poem # 1, 242

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/15/2020 11:52:00 AM

You had me in tears with this poem a mothers love shines so brightly and lovingly, I feel the same about Ricky - I am blessed. CJ and I are very close, our 2nd Son. He's a darling. Ricky has my father's nature, just plain kind! Blessing Panagiota, Jennifer.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/15/2020 11:59:00 AM

I bet your sons are delightful, Jemmifer mou! Mothers remember tucking them in, walking them to school...a memory bank of memories that sparkles. I cried, you cried, Maria cried. Would love to step back in time, if only for a few minutes, PR xo Thanks so much

Joe Dimino

Date: 6/15/2020 7:57:00 AM

Beautiful, sensitive write. Love it, Panagiota. Joe.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/15/2020 9:27:00 AM

Line. 17 was my error! "now by now" makes no sense. Should have been "know my now." in any case, am glad you enjoyed it and pointed out my error. PRxo

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/15/2020 4:07:00 AM

Twinkle, twinkle, my little Maria. God be with you, wherever you are....WOW so beautiful tribute words......pleasure to read

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/15/2020 9:33:00 AM

Mantab! I am grateful you caught the beauty in those lines, you mentioned. I liked them, too Very simple, nothing earthshaking! )) just a Mother's words. PR xo

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/15/2020 12:01:00 AM

A beautiful tribute to Maria, she will love this Panagiota. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/15/2020 12:03:00 AM

Merci, Tom. I do hope she likes it. pR