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January 17, 2020
~2nd Place (shared)~ Dear Heart Poetry Contest, sponsored by Silent One

May 24, 2020 ~ 2nd Place (shared)~ in the "Ten Poems That Define Me (That's Your Title)" Poetry Contest, Line Gauthier, Judge & Sponsor.


Please Sir

Beautiful downtown Atlanta
Sunny, blue, cloudless sky
Tall, wide, massive buildings
Window glass glistening in the sun
Beautiful, well-dressed people
Gainfully employed people
Taking care of business people
Running essential errands
Contributing to the community
Pursuing positive, purposeful lives.

I take in the sights, sounds, smells
Sounds of people walking, talking
Engines revving and car horns honking
Smells of restaurants and fast food vendors
Engine exhaust and overheated brakes
Feel of the sidewalk
Under my expensive dress shoes
Heat of the sun on my face and neck
Exciting hustle and bustle
Of a thriving metropolis.

A faint, “Please, sir …” reaches my ears
And a homeless man appears
Dirty, disheveled, hirsute
“Please, sir, could you …”
I divert my eyes, quicken my pace
Ignoring his petty pleas
His weak speech trails off
As he disappears in my wake
Bothersome soul, good riddance!
Why doesn’t the city do something?

Days later the encounter troubled me
I was so proud of the way I handled myself
How easy it is to dismiss a soul in need
Months later the encounter tormented me
Instead of the clever human I thought I was
I had become unfeeling, unkind, uncaring
Years later the encounter still haunts me
Never will it ever happen again
Never … ever …
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Cornish Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 10:04 AM
You've described those thoughts perfectly and I have written of the same a couple times and it's sad and true---our conscience must bear our choices yet, it's important that we have a conscience to report to! BTW, it's weird that when I copied and pasted from the blog it added a prefix which I had to delete which said "Block poet from commenting on your post?"? Strange?
Toney Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 10:28 AM
Very strange. I think what may have happened is your copy and paste also caught the block-poet eyeball, so when you pasted it the prompt appeared. Having said that, you are absolutely right, it is important that we have a conscience to respond to!
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 5:30 AM
I'd sometimes say I'll buy you a Nuway hotdog, but not $Well done!
Toney Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 9:40 AM
Thank you, Barbara! I’d go a long way for a Nuway! ;)
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 5:39 PM
I am a sucker for those who ask for money though some I found out are asking to buy cigarettes which makes me cringe. Compassion has a way of winding its way into your heart. This as well as your other 9 choices for this contest impress Mark. Congratulations on your win! xxoo
Toney Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 6:08 PM
Thank you, Connie, for your kind encouragement. Best wishes to you and yours and stay safe! ~Mark
Gauthier Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 1:17 AM
Many of us can totally relate on being uncomfortable with where we draw the line on giving/withholding compassion. Great share.
Toney Avatar
July 30, 2020 at 12:10 PM
So true, Line. Thank you for the contest and your thoughtful comments. ~Mark
One Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 7:35 AM
you call your heart sir? Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Toney Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 8:23 AM
Lol. . . I call my heart every day, and sometimes it answers ;) Thank you for the placement, Silent One, in your very thought-provoking contest, and congratulations to all of the others who placed. ~Mark
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