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January 17, 2020
~2nd Place (shared)~ Dear Heart Poetry Contest, sponsored by Silent One


Beautiful downtown Atlanta Sunny, blue, cloudless sky Tall, wide, massive buildings Window glass glistening in the sun Beautiful, well-dressed people Gainfully employed people Taking care of business people Running essential errands Contributing to the community Pursuing positive, purposeful lives. I take in the sights, sounds, smells Sounds of people walking, talking Engines revving and car horns honking Smells of restaurants and fast food vendors Engine exhaust and overheated brakes Feel of the sidewalk Under my expensive dress shoes Heat of the sun on my face and neck Exciting hustle and bustle Of a thriving metropolis. A faint, “Please, sir …” reaches my ears And a homeless man appears Dirty, disheveled, hirsute “Please, sir, could you …” I divert my eyes, quicken my pace Ignoring his petty pleas His weak speech trails off As he disappears in my wake Bothersome soul, good riddance! Why doesn’t the city do something? Days later the encounter troubled me I was so proud of the way I handled myself How easy it is to dismiss a soul in need Months later the encounter tormented me Instead of the clever human I thought I was I had become unfeeling, unkind, uncaring Years later the encounter still haunts me Never will it ever happen again Never … ever …

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Date: 2/16/2021 5:30:00 AM
I'd sometimes say I'll buy you a Nuway hotdog, but not $Well done!
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Date: 2/26/2021 9:40:00 AM
Thank you, Barbara! I’d go a long way for a Nuway! ;)
Date: 5/24/2020 5:39:00 PM
I am a sucker for those who ask for money though some I found out are asking to buy cigarettes which makes me cringe. Compassion has a way of winding its way into your heart. This as well as your other 9 choices for this contest impress Mark. Congratulations on your win! xxoo
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Date: 5/24/2020 6:08:00 PM
Thank you, Connie, for your kind encouragement. Best wishes to you and yours and stay safe! ~Mark
Date: 5/24/2020 1:17:00 AM
Many of us can totally relate on being uncomfortable with where we draw the line on giving/withholding compassion. Great share.
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Mark Toney
Date: 7/30/2020 12:10:00 PM
So true, Line. Thank you for the contest and your thoughtful comments. ~Mark
Date: 1/19/2020 7:35:00 AM
you call your heart sir? Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 1/19/2020 8:23:00 AM
Lol. . . I call my heart every day, and sometimes it answers ;) Thank you for the placement, Silent One, in your very thought-provoking contest, and congratulations to all of the others who placed. ~Mark

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