David William Breidenthal Poet Rhyme

Please Reveal the Right Time

I lie awake inside my mind's ride
Gotta body-quake it away side by side
I fly away from my cage inside
And…I…and I tried to peacefully hide

I…tried to peacefully hide – denied 
Please don’t subside...don’t kill me with bitter pride
Didn’t mean to fail inside! 
There’s price unpaid with debt-credited stride 

But, I fell down, weighed down, way down now 
Below the dust and the dryland's ground...
I wanna break free if you would let me somehow
I’ve been lost without a spark or a sound

Without a spark or a sound

Shake away the shame
And the shade along with it
Make me not your game
You horse around with a bit

Around with a bit, I admit

Don’t forget about me, forgive me possibly
Lay all your comfortless burdens down on me
Break away the bravery of cowardice sway 
Stay with me for a while and stray not away 

For a while, stray not away, here is where you stay

Clear away the clutter in our lives…
Hoard not the hatred, burying us alive
Fear will soon not draw near, it dives
Into the bottomless ocean of we-will-survive

We will survive and arrive undone beyond the commotion

Reality's demise got me thinkin'
Dreaming of you got me sinkin'
Negativity got my mind stinkin'

I will settle down and talk way less then

Desires churn with fiery-like admiration
I’m sick of having a lack of concentration
I'm still longing for a wondrous sensation

Don’t doubt me or let me go without hesitation 

Listen, listen to my…heartbeats' progress 
Beating away the burdensome thoughts I have thought of, guess it wasn’t really enough, tough luck 
Kiss away my distress, my sad loneliness –
It all came in the heartless, freezing climate of unreachable love; times like these get rough per buck 

Times like these get rough and I know, it does suck!

Rescue my soul from solitude's hold on me
Steer away the waves of my roaring misery
I lie awake inside my mind's ride, deeper side by side
Abide by my side, unleash me from this prison inside 

Unleash me from this leech-of-a-prison inside
To step on the brakes to cease life's car ride 
Unleash me from this leach-of-a-derision, it lied 
To make the truth and all to hide, naught to hide

Unleash me from this painful, poorly passion-packed prison – till it’s all nearly gone –

Where I peacefully hide…
Where I swim in below-shallow waters, darling, that’s where I rove
Where I noiselessly cried…
When's the right time to belong? A spark of love will guide me above

So, reveal the right time….
A time of shine, not this time of grime
Reveal the priceless prime
In hopes that I get out of here this time...

In hopes that I run out of here before times like these go awry, 
How….sublime...

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