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Please, Mum

Mum's just made a lovely cake She has just put it on the table I wish I could have a slice I'll ask Mum if I'm able She said no emphatically And please do not snaffle I did not make the cake for you I made it for a raffle

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Date: 11/17/2019 11:42:00 PM
##I did not make the cake for you## Cruel.. A story in 8 lines..
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Date: 11/17/2019 9:45:00 PM
Can I buy a ticket? hehe... fun write. Loved it. Ann
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