Please, May There Beano More Gas

There was an old man from Bluegrass,
          who always ate green sassafras.
                        His tummy got icky,
                        somersaults and sicky,
                 took pills, now there’ll BEANO more gas!




A Limerick, Old or New: Your personal favorite Poetry Contest
8-8-6-6-8 syllable count
howmanysyllables.com


Written: April 10, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Nance Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 7:26 AM
good word play. :) grats
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 12:24 AM
Congrats on your fine win, Laura Loo. How are things going for you these days?
Roper Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 9:18 PM
Congratulations on your great well written win, Laura, so very witty :) enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
Gentry Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 8:58 AM
Congratulations again on your win. Well done!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 11:25 PM
Congratulations, Laura on your win. Great Limerick.
Allison Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 4:58 PM
clever word play LuLoo many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 3:21 PM
Phazyme's pretty good too! CONGRATS, Luloo! Janice
Devonshire Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 11:31 AM
Well done, Laura! Congratulations on your win and thanks for supporting the congest. Carolyn
Roper Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 10:57 AM
Great funny Limerick, Laura, congratulations on your Win!!! Hugs Eve
Gentry Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 9:39 AM
Congratulations on your win with this clever limerick!
Dietrich Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 5:11 PM
Love your word play there, Laura Loo. BIG congratulations.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 4:09 PM
Your Limerick was very clever Luloo. Congratulations on your win! : )
Richards Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 3:33 PM
How cute this is !!! There will beano lack of laughing today !!!
Callus Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 3:22 PM
Enjoyed your wit and play on words, Laura:) Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
Devonshire Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 2:52 PM
Wonderfully witty, Laura. Funny also how there is an ad for "Beano" on this page. LOL Congrats on your win!
Smith Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 12:17 PM
Funnny LuLoo, congratulations ...
Canerdy Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 8:28 AM
Congrats, Luloo! Janice
Talbot Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 6:56 AM
Congratulations LuLoo! Mick
Gauthier Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 5:02 AM
Back with congrats on your fine win, Laura.
Allison Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 3:13 AM
many congrats LuLoo:-) hugs jan xx
Y. Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 1:23 AM
Lol! Laura, All of a sudden I "smell" something. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
Sands Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 9:20 AM
Good one Laura! :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 9:15 AM
Sweet, Laura.
Allison Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 8:57 AM
very clever wordplay LuLoo:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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