Please Let Me Know

Tell me son
what happened 
on that Friday afternoon

You were taken without warning
You were taken far too soon
No time to say goodbyes 
As your spirit calmly rose above
the trauma down below

Tell me son 
did someone call your name
and gently take you by the hand
escaping all the pain

Son do you remember
Did you know who came 
Did you have an inkling
Did you have a call
Did you know 
my darling boy
anything at all

Are you somewhere calm now
with all of those you love
A peaceful place
A joyful place
If only I could see your face
I hope you’re in a better place

Tell me son
please let me know
why you had to go



Written 25th December 2019
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Pandit Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 7:02 AM
Keeping you in my thoughts and prayers, Ann.
Gilmour Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 1:40 PM
I thank you for that Vijay and I truly appreciate your kindness and prayers dear friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Krutsinger Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 10:00 PM
Beautifully written. Heartfelt. I pray you receive an answer my friend. I have missed you. Welcome back!
Gilmour Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 1:42 PM
Since returning I have felt such love and kindness from my dear friends on PS. Especially you dearest Caren and I thank you from my heart. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Allison Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 7:36 PM
aww Ann I am welling up again, I wish there was a way for him to give you answers to your questions, thinking of you at this difficult time:-( hugs Jan xx
Gilmour Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 1:46 PM
Oh bless you dear Jan, your kind heart and soul are beautiful and I thank you for your support. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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