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Becca Teagan I’ve heard that you’re leaving My stomach is now churning and heaving Salty tears start to flow I don’t want you to go You are loved here and now I am grieving Dear Becca you are part of this group Just take a break from poetry soup So please take a rest Then come back refreshed And the souper’s will be cock a hoop! Written for Bye Bye Becca Contest Sponsored by Jerry T Curtis

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Date: 10/17/2016 9:51:00 PM
She is part of this group, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/18/2016 2:57:00 AM
Thanks Eve I hope she stays:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/17/2016 12:08:00 PM
Congrats on your win Jan...
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Date: 10/17/2016 5:53:00 PM
Thanks Joseph:-)hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/1/2016 7:45:00 PM
I agree not to say goodbye to Becca as well, just know Becca you be dearly missed and see you when you return, take care until then XO. Beautiful write Jan. Hugs
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Date: 10/17/2016 5:54:00 PM
I hope she stays on soup Cecilia:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/24/2016 7:14:00 AM
This should make her stay:) great encouraging write, Jan:)
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Date: 9/25/2016 5:51:00 PM
I hope she does stay Jo - there are too many lovely people who just disappear:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/22/2016 2:04:00 PM
Until the contest I didn't know she was leaving... Good poem for her to read.
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Date: 9/25/2016 5:50:00 PM
Nor did I:-( Thanks for your comment Carol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/20/2016 11:03:00 AM
I did not know that Becca had left, but having read your limerick appeal I am sure she would be tempted to change her mind! Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/20/2016 11:42:00 AM
All I know is that Jerry has done a contest and I had to write to encourage her to stay:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/19/2016 11:11:00 PM
Just lovely poem, filled with a great sadness. Yaa! It really feels very sad when someone goes. All the best for the contest.
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Date: 9/20/2016 6:21:00 AM
Thanks Augastus:-)I hope she changes her mind it would be very sad to lose her from the soup community:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/18/2016 6:35:00 PM
a very well-written plea, jan! it's always sad when favorite poets leave the soup but it's been happening since i've been here and there's not much we can do about it. maybe this will do the trick...
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Date: 9/19/2016 1:53:00 AM
I've seen it too Ilene and I hope Becca just has a break and doesn't leave:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/18/2016 6:05:00 PM
Cool poem for Becca. She is a lovely lady. I gotta think of one too!! I never heard of cock a hoop!!
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Date: 9/19/2016 1:52:00 AM
cock a hoop means 'extremely and obviously pleased' :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/18/2016 5:15:00 PM
Beautiful write Jan... I hope Becca stays
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Date: 9/18/2016 5:18:00 PM
Me to Jospeh I hope the contest fills fast too:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/18/2016 1:50:00 PM
This is so sweet Jan. I hope Becca enjoys it and comes back soon!
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Date: 9/18/2016 1:51:00 PM
Me too Connie in my relatively short time on soup I have seen some lovely friends come and go - I just hope Becca takes a break:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/18/2016 12:57:00 PM
Nice poem. Best wises for the contest. Enjoyed........// hugs//Manmath....
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Date: 9/18/2016 12:59:00 PM
Thanks Manmath:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/18/2016 12:44:00 PM
Well written, Jan. I have not been here long but I feel a loss when poets leave. Barry.
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Date: 9/18/2016 12:58:00 PM
I see people come and go Barry - I hope Jerry's contest does the trick and she just takes a break:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/18/2016 12:00:00 PM
Hugs, Jan!
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Date: 9/18/2016 12:05:00 PM
:-) hugs back Darren:-) Jan xx