Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

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Please Don'T Grumble About My Apple Crumble

With sugar, butter and flour I fumble -
it’s a great way of cleaning my nails
Don’t grumble when finding specks in your crumble ...
but I’ll know when I see your face pales!

A pure tongue in cheek poem... but we have been given lots of cooking apples and I'm going to make apple crumble!!

10-23-17

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Andrea Dietrich October 24, 2017 at 6:29 PM oh, Jan, this is delightful!!! Love it. Finally I am caught up here and now I need to write MORE poems (but first to walk my dog!!!) Jan Allison October 25, 2017 at 7:11 AM I am so busy at the moment I never have time to catch up:-( shock horror i am going to the pictures tonight to see Blade Runner - son recommends it... but says i will probably fall asleep (he knows me of old lol) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues October 23, 2017 at 7:38 PM A cute one! Jan Allison October 23, 2017 at 7:40 PM Thanks Kim:-) hugs jan xx

Pat Adams October 23, 2017 at 7:35 PM That 2nd line made me physically shudder!!!....80).... Good one! I love an apple ugly and apple crumble, but my all time favorite is peach cobbler! Yum Yum .......Great write! Jan Allison October 23, 2017 at 7:39 PM lol Pat I'm glad I got that reaction - pure tongue in cheek poem but the crumble (minus any dark bits) is delicious!:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith October 23, 2017 at 2:39 PM lol...I wont look close Jan Allison October 23, 2017 at 2:51 PM lol - there is plenty left but I would need to make some more custard!:-) hugs Jan xx

John Gondolf October 23, 2017 at 11:24 AM Jan, your crumble sounds delicious (without the specks of course). John Jan Allison October 23, 2017 at 1:27 PM I am still full from the fish pie i made for tea, but the crumble is ready as soon as I am:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. October 23, 2017 at 10:33 AM Hi Jan, I love apple pie but I haven't tried apple crumble. You make me want to give it a try.PS, put on gloves though:-) AlexisAlexis Jan Allison October 23, 2017 at 1:25 PM Oh crumble is so easy to make just butter rubbed into flour and sugar, but I have seen a recipe that includes oats so I will try that next time:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane October 23, 2017 at 8:35 AM You've been making me drool for weeks since you first told me about your apple crumble, but I think I'll pass on the next batch unless you wash those nasty hands. lol Oh Jan, your imagination does run the gambit of adventuresome topics! Jan Allison October 23, 2017 at 8:54 AM I've made the crumble mix (with clean hands) now I'm going to make a fish pie:-) xx

Carol B. October 23, 2017 at 8:15 AM Jan, This is one of my favourite desserts. Especially this time of year. Enjoyed the poem. Enjoy your apple crumble. :) Jan Allison October 23, 2017 at 8:19 AM Thanks carol - :-) will make sure i wash my hands very well especially as I am making an extra crumble for the lovely friend who gave us the apples:-) hugs Jan xx