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Please Don'T Go

as I sit watching you, making sure you're comfortable, I'm praying that God's k9angels can't really fly, holding your hand, positioning mine between tubes, filled with liquid life, I pray your angel can't really fly. I love you so, But if you must go, I'll pray for your angel to try.

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Date: 4/2/2019 10:22:00 PM
Among all the poems i have read tonight this one hit the heart strings the hardest...bittersweet, Vicky!
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 4/3/2019 6:20:00 PM
Thank You Kyle, glad you visited and for commenting. Vickie
Date: 4/1/2019 4:04:00 PM
This is a sad but sweet rhyme Vickie...have a lovely day :)
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 4/1/2019 4:10:00 PM
Thanks much Chris...you, too
Date: 3/30/2019 7:26:00 AM
Heartfelt..lovingly said!
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 3/30/2019 8:38:00 AM
Vijay...Thanks so much. Vickie
Date: 3/30/2019 6:00:00 AM
We all have to go one day, sadly.... deeply expressed..
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 3/30/2019 6:04:00 AM
Yes...Just not now...I have lots to do yet...Lots to do. Thanks..,
Date: 3/30/2019 12:26:00 AM
Very emotional verse Vickie, I could see the sad image of someone at a hospital bed, just hoping and praying. Tom.
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 3/30/2019 5:58:00 AM
Thanks, Tom.
Date: 3/29/2019 10:06:00 PM
Lovely. Very moving.
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 3/30/2019 5:59:00 AM
Thanks for commenting, David.
Date: 3/29/2019 9:17:00 PM
Angelic wings soaring with the spirit...A touching write Vickie
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 3/30/2019 6:03:00 AM
Thanks for commenting and visiting Joseph.

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