Please Be My Valentine

Oh Valentine, Oh Valentine,
Please won’t you be my Valentine,
I love you oh so very much,
I always hunger for your touch
I think about you all the time,
I know that one day you’ll be mine,
Friends say, you're pretty as a picture,
Of Greek and English you're a mixture,
I want to ask you to marry me,
To understand what you mean to me, 
You are my everlasting destiny,
And bring me to the brink of ecstasy,
We’ll build a love nest in a tree,
Like the birds we’ll fly so free,
We’ll have one girl and a little boy,
Who’ll bring us so much fun and joy,
So Valentine, my Valentine,
Please be my own dear Valentine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 10/11/2023 12:33:00 PM
So romantic. I love it.
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Date: 3/9/2023 1:01:00 PM
Sweet as can be. Hope you are doing well.
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Date: 2/19/2023 3:52:00 PM
Aw, this is cute; could even be made into an adorable song, the rhymes so good. Enjoyed.
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Date: 2/16/2023 5:18:00 AM
Such a cute proposal!!! So beautifully written, Jennifer... Enjoyed watching this...
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Date: 2/12/2023 7:51:00 PM
Great verse for Valentine my friend. Nice to have one of each child... I had three boys. They are all my world.
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Date: 2/12/2023 2:14:00 PM
A pen of hopeful young lovers; I hope they achieved all they dreamd of; beautiful for the holiday.
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Date: 2/12/2023 10:57:00 AM
It' s a really cute write Jennifer. Happy Valentines Day..Nancy
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Date: 2/11/2023 3:03:00 PM
Happy Valentine's Day, Jennifer! I loved the poem my friend. I'm back! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 2/6/2023 9:33:00 AM
A poem of love and longing--a delightful write, Jennifer. Much enjoyed the voice of your poem my friend.
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Date: 2/6/2023 10:15:00 AM
A lovely comment thank you Vijay and very happy you enjoyed my Valentines poem. I wish you a wonderful Valentine's day. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Date: 2/5/2023 1:43:00 PM
This is light and lovely, sweetly romantic…Valentine hugs ~
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/6/2023 10:17:00 AM
Thank you Kim my sweet friend - I hope you have a super duper Valentines Day. Hugs and blessings Jennifer .
Date: 2/4/2023 4:20:00 AM
Ahh!! So apt for the approaching Valentine season. If it were a very young man, it might scare him off though with talk of boys and girls, etc. LOL..Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/6/2023 10:19:00 AM
Hi Sara thank you for your comment - perhaps I would you are so right. A lovely day I wish for you too . Hugs and blessings Jennifer .
Date: 2/3/2023 4:48:00 PM
Such appropriate poetry for Valentines Jennifer. Lovely to read and I hope your Valentine is all you want ti to be. God bless you...
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/6/2023 10:22:00 AM
Thank you my friend, I wish the same for you also . Thank you always for you thoughtful comments. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/3/2023 3:22:00 PM
Who could resist being your Valentine, Jennifer, after reading this lovely poem. Take care, Shirley
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Date: 2/2/2023 10:09:00 PM
Wow! Jenny, What an adorable Valentine's Day poem. You wrote this for your hubby, didn't you? I'm sure he just loved it. PS, How are you my friend from across the pond? I hope your New Year is going well thus far:-) Alexis
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Alexis Y.
Date: 2/4/2023 6:46:00 AM
Jenny don't apologize for nothing, life happens. It's good to hear you are on the mend. Just know you have a friend in me always. Whether I'm active on the soup or not. I hope I can visit Africa (the mother land) and meet you my dear friend from across the pond:-)Alexis
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/3/2023 2:00:00 PM
Hey Alexis my friend how lovely to see your name and wonderful comment on my page.. I have missed you and can't blame any one but myself sorry Alexis I have always treasured you as a friend I was very ill last September and landed up I hospital 3 days of which were in ICU. I wish you and your family awesome 2023 . Love and blessings Jennifer.
Date: 2/2/2023 5:38:00 PM
I'm humming this, Jennifer, there is only one answer, here, my dear friend, but bet the competition is frightening. Harry
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/3/2023 8:46:00 AM
Funny you should say so Harry, because i used the tune of 'Oh Christmas Tree oh Christmas Tree'........, this Christmas song and my poem must have a connection. Hope you are feeling as right as rain now my friend Hugs an blessings Jennifer.
Date: 2/1/2023 1:31:00 PM
The most lovely and sincere form of gratitude! Your touching poetry, Jennifer, captures the nuanced feelings of love, longing, emotion, and optimism so well. Your passion waltz is beautiful. Divine love is the greatest feeling in the world. I hope you have a wonderful Valentine's Day, dear friend.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/1/2023 2:21:00 PM
Hi Lasaad what a wonderful complimentary comment, thank you . I wanted to encompass all human emotions and you nailed my thinking! Be well my friend. Blessings and hugs Jennifer.
Date: 2/1/2023 10:25:00 AM
Lovely Jennifer, musical and so romantic. Was the tune you wrote this to “0 Christmas Tree”… Belle
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/1/2023 1:25:00 PM
Oh you are such a clever girl. I always said we are on the same wave length, bravo my dear friend. Hope you are well and that 2023 will treat us both kindly. Blessings and hugs Jennifer
Date: 2/1/2023 3:58:00 AM
The nuances of love , desire, passion and hope are beautifully expressed in your charming poem dear Jennifer ! I love the dance of love you have created. Nothing compares to love ! Hugs and Happy Valentines to you dear ! Susan :)
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/1/2023 8:13:00 AM
Hi Susan, thank you for a beautiful comment, and funny you mentioned the dance of love because when I wrote my poem, i sang my words to the music of a song I know, but for the life of me cannot remember its title. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer
Date: 2/1/2023 2:07:00 AM
- Romantic ... a lovely valentine poem, my friend :) - hugs
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/1/2023 8:23:00 AM
Thank you dearest Sis., I always look forward to your comments and take special note of them. I must guess, that you are looking forward to Spring and happy as you entered the last month of Winter. Love and hugs, Jennifer
Date: 2/1/2023 1:24:00 AM
Nothing is more romantic and beautiful than a love nest built on a tree. Love conquers all.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/1/2023 8:26:00 AM
Thank you Victor for your great comments and your so appreciated support. Love does conquer all. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 1/31/2023 11:49:00 PM
A lovely romantic verse Jennifer, I hope he says yes. Hope you're keeping well Tom
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/1/2023 8:33:00 AM
Thank-you Tom he did, but happy to share with anyone else that can identify with it. Thank-you also for your wonderful, loyal and continued support, and all your lovely comments. Hope you and your family are keeping well and warm. Blessings, Jennifer.
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