Please Be My Val

I have waited for eternity just to hear you say,
'Yes, I will be yours',
and we will together travel the path,
that is paved with lovely red roses.
Now, I can see in your eyes,
that glittering power of passion,
that roused my shriveled hope,
as I make this request,
will you please be my Val,
even if it is just for a day?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Aderounmu Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 7:42 AM
Luvly piece so sweet for Val's day. Good job.
Palli Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 4:14 AM
So sweet!
Dietrich Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 6:33 PM
Very sweet and precious, my friend.
Komala Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 7:57 AM
very nice written my friend Modupe..enjoyed.. have your wonderful day :) Sk
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