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Please Be My Val

I have waited for eternity just to hear you say, 'Yes, I will be yours', and we will together travel the path, that is paved with lovely red roses. Now, I can see in your eyes, that glittering power of passion, that roused my shriveled hope, as I make this request, will you please be my Val, even if it is just for a day?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/19/2013 7:42:00 AM
Luvly piece so sweet for Val's day. Good job.
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Date: 2/11/2013 4:14:00 AM
So sweet!
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Date: 2/7/2013 6:33:00 PM
Very sweet and precious, my friend.
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Date: 2/7/2013 7:57:00 AM
very nice written my friend Modupe..enjoyed.. have your wonderful day :) Sk
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Book: Shattered Sighs