Please

Leaving us Please -no Why -please Please -stay Think -please You’re not pleased Please- a clean break and swift goodbye As you leave, don’t look back -please Please- miss my tears and my collapse Time start healing -please Please- mend a shattered heart Remove all painful memory -please Please- hurry- PLEASE

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P.S. Awtry

Date: 11/25/2018 7:29:00 PM

Oh the pain of a powerless please :( Well done

Warren Doll
Date: 11/26/2018 9:34:00 AM

Thanks for your positive comments and visit, P.S.

Carole Duet

Date: 11/20/2018 1:41:00 PM

This one grabbed my heart...and pleased me because it emotes such sincere pleas and sadness.

Warren Doll
Date: 11/24/2018 2:37:00 PM

Hi Carole, time will heal, I've yet to be convinced of this. Thanks for your comments and visit~ Warren

Deb Radke

Date: 11/15/2018 8:38:00 PM

Yes. I feel the pleading in this beautiful and haunting poem. Very skillfully done. Deb

Warren Doll
Date: 11/19/2018 8:00:00 AM

Hi Deb, thanks for your positive comments and visit. Warm wishes,~ Warren

Carole Duet

Date: 11/5/2018 12:54:00 PM

Yes, "PLEASE" pleases me, Warren. I can relate. :D

Warren Doll
Date: 11/6/2018 11:28:00 AM

Hi Carole, It's terrible to experience, but I think it makes us stronger. Thanks for your visit. All the best~ Warren

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/27/2018 12:33:00 PM

Please is an enigmatic word that has so many uses Waren. I have a metaphoric poem with the same title I wrote some time ago. One of my only few dark poems. This poem reminded me of it. I enjoyed this. : )

Warren Doll
Date: 10/27/2018 2:02:00 PM

I just read your poem "Please" from 02-02-2016 and left a reply. Glad you don't write many dark poems. It was devastating. I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem "Please" ~Warren:)

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/22/2018 8:05:00 AM

Powerful feelings expressed so well with this poem. I can feel it as I read it. Well done :)

Warren Doll
Date: 10/22/2018 3:49:00 PM

Hi Heidi, Thanks for all of your support and comments. Very appreciated~ Warren

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/17/2018 3:08:00 AM

- Painful memory will never disappear, but they will fade - Lots of emotions and great writing, Warren - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll
Date: 10/18/2018 9:23:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, It's the fading that isn't fast enough for me. Thanks for your positive comments. Sending a warm, big, hug your way. ~Warren

Mockingbird Stevenson

Date: 10/16/2018 6:21:00 PM

Wow! Expressive +++ Hope you are well. Mockingbird x

Warren Doll
Date: 10/18/2018 9:17:00 AM

All is well. Thanks for your kind comments and visit, Mockingbird. ~Warren

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/15/2018 2:03:00 PM

Warren, your use of 'please' is expressed with poignant power and tender surrender.. A captivating piece of being at the mercy of turbulent emotions. Superb! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Warren Doll
Date: 10/16/2018 9:31:00 AM

Hi Susan, I appreciate your in depth comments and support. I'm so glad that you liked it, Warmest wishes to you too. ~Warren

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/15/2018 9:36:00 AM

A powerful and emotive piece Warren !!! Unique and urgent!

Warren Doll
Date: 10/16/2018 9:25:00 AM

Hi Mike, Thanks so much for your positive comments~Warren

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/15/2018 9:00:00 AM

The feelings of parting..well captured, Warren.

Warren Doll
Date: 10/16/2018 8:34:00 AM

Thanks so much, Vijay.