Warren Doll Poet Free verse

Please

Leaving us
Please -no
Why -please
Please -stay
Think -please

You’re not pleased
Please- a clean break and swift goodbye 
As you leave, don’t look back -please
Please- miss my tears and my collapse 

Time start healing -please
Please- mend a shattered heart 
Remove all painful memory -please
Please- hurry- PLEASE

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P.S. Awtry November 25, 2018 at 7:29 PM Oh the pain of a powerless please :( Well done Warren Doll November 26, 2018 at 9:34 AM Thanks for your positive comments and visit, P.S.

Carole Duet November 20, 2018 at 1:41 PM This one grabbed my heart...and pleased me because it emotes such sincere pleas and sadness. Warren Doll November 24, 2018 at 2:37 PM Hi Carole, time will heal, I've yet to be convinced of this. Thanks for your comments and visit~ Warren

Deb Radke November 15, 2018 at 8:38 PM Yes. I feel the pleading in this beautiful and haunting poem. Very skillfully done. Deb Warren Doll November 19, 2018 at 8:00 AM Hi Deb, thanks for your positive comments and visit. Warm wishes,~ Warren

Carole Duet November 5, 2018 at 12:54 PM Yes, "PLEASE" pleases me, Warren. I can relate. :D Warren Doll November 6, 2018 at 11:28 AM Hi Carole, It's terrible to experience, but I think it makes us stronger. Thanks for your visit. All the best~ Warren

Connie Marcum Wong October 27, 2018 at 12:33 PM Please is an enigmatic word that has so many uses Waren. I have a metaphoric poem with the same title I wrote some time ago. One of my only few dark poems. This poem reminded me of it. I enjoyed this. : ) Warren Doll October 27, 2018 at 2:02 PM I just read your poem "Please" from 02-02-2016 and left a reply. Glad you don't write many dark poems. It was devastating. I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem "Please" ~Warren:)

Heidi Sands October 22, 2018 at 8:05 AM Powerful feelings expressed so well with this poem. I can feel it as I read it. Well done :) Warren Doll October 22, 2018 at 3:49 PM Hi Heidi, Thanks for all of your support and comments. Very appreciated~ Warren

Anne-Lise Andresen October 17, 2018 at 3:08 AM - Painful memory will never disappear, but they will fade - Lots of emotions and great writing, Warren - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Warren Doll October 18, 2018 at 9:23 AM Hi Anne-Lise, It's the fading that isn't fast enough for me. Thanks for your positive comments. Sending a warm, big, hug your way. ~Warren

Mockingbird Stevenson October 16, 2018 at 6:21 PM Wow! Expressive +++ Hope you are well. Mockingbird x Warren Doll October 18, 2018 at 9:17 AM All is well. Thanks for your kind comments and visit, Mockingbird. ~Warren

Susan Ashley October 15, 2018 at 2:03 PM Warren, your use of 'please' is expressed with poignant power and tender surrender.. A captivating piece of being at the mercy of turbulent emotions. Superb! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Warren Doll October 16, 2018 at 9:31 AM Hi Susan, I appreciate your in depth comments and support. I'm so glad that you liked it, Warmest wishes to you too. ~Warren

Mike Gentile October 15, 2018 at 9:36 AM A powerful and emotive piece Warren !!! Unique and urgent! Warren Doll October 16, 2018 at 9:25 AM Hi Mike, Thanks so much for your positive comments~Warren

Vijay Pandit October 15, 2018 at 9:00 AM The feelings of parting..well captured, Warren. Warren Doll October 16, 2018 at 8:34 AM Thanks so much, Vijay.