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Pleading Heart

~ Thou art my pleading heart Thy kiss my tendered dream Neath moonlit crescents part A float yon slumbered stream Thy flesh of satin touch As sweet as midnight stroll Lest life to pass me by A’ shimmer ‘pon my soul Pure eyes of supple gaze So deeply call my mind To spring blessed feathered days Lo’ promises to find Soft lips a’ fall my own As delicate a rose Of heaven’s holy throne O’er whispered breezes flows My love, o’ take me so Relieve my tortured fire This pleading heart doth show Tis thee my true desire ~

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/28/2020 4:03:00 AM

- A tender and beautiful poem, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green
Date: 1/28/2020 7:33:00 AM

Thank you my friend for all of your kindness

Eve Roper

Date: 1/27/2020 4:27:00 PM

Beautiful verse , with deep emotion, great flow. I need to take lessons from you. Hugs Eve

Chris Green
Date: 1/28/2020 7:33:00 AM

Thank you so very much Eve.

Hello There

Date: 1/27/2020 10:03:00 AM

Love this Pleading Heart and the poetic vibes of times past. Just my cup of tea ~ A fave :)

Chris Green
Date: 1/27/2020 10:16:00 AM

Thank you HT for your kind words. I am happy you liked this one.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/26/2020 9:35:00 PM

Romance dances in this piece that could have come from the renaissance Chris. Thank you for the cheer you inject into every poem. Lovely! xxoo

Chris Green
Date: 1/27/2020 7:55:00 AM

Thank you Connie for always being so nice to me.

Ronald D Thompson

Date: 1/26/2020 5:29:00 PM

Excellent as always Chris. Good to see the pen flowing. Best wishes...Ron :)

Chris Green
Date: 1/27/2020 7:54:00 AM

Thank so much my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/26/2020 7:20:00 AM

Awesome Chris, your poems are like blissful dreams - you are definitely the King of love poems. Blessings, Jennifer.

Chris Green
Date: 1/27/2020 7:54:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/25/2020 4:45:00 PM

Within the limits of six syllable lines, a lovely poem!

Chris Green
Date: 1/27/2020 7:54:00 AM

Thanks so much again Kim.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 1/25/2020 11:57:00 AM

A Chris Green "touching the heart" original!

Chris Green
Date: 1/27/2020 7:53:00 AM

Thanks so very much Sunlite.

Charles Messina

Date: 1/24/2020 11:34:00 PM

Doth the words are spoken in a Shakespearian way.. and I doth , enjoy the read. Very Nice, Chris! Have a great weekend .. C.M.

Chris Green
Date: 1/27/2020 7:53:00 AM

Thanks so much my friend. Happy you liked this one.

Juliet Ligon

Date: 1/24/2020 11:18:00 PM

Enticing descriptions. How lovely.

Chris Green
Date: 1/27/2020 7:52:00 AM

Thank you so very much Juliet

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/24/2020 6:29:00 PM

I love how you wrote this one. It has an elegant, enchanting feel to it as if being in a beautiful ballroom. Took me away, Chris. Nice other places. Well written :)

Chris Green
Date: 1/27/2020 7:52:00 AM

Thank you Heidi for your always kinds words to me.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/24/2020 6:16:00 PM

Your poetry, your own...so many ways and words to your romantic collection!

Chris Green
Date: 1/27/2020 7:52:00 AM

Thanks so much Kim.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/24/2020 5:35:00 PM

Beautiful poetry, like a running stream, straight into my senses it goes. Thank you Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 1/27/2020 7:51:00 AM

Thank you so much Pixie

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/24/2020 5:28:00 PM

wow... this one has such an archaic feel to it... like something shakespeare would write.... playing with older language to achieve this? if so it worked... your talent always shines in everything you pen...you are amazing my friend... hugs

Chris Green
Date: 1/24/2020 5:31:00 PM

Yep, just playing around with words. Glad you liked it. Thank you so very much Sandy for always being so kind to me.