Chris Green Poet Rhyme

Pleading Heart

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Thou art my pleading heart
Thy kiss my tendered dream
Neath moonlit crescents part
A float yon slumbered stream

Thy flesh of satin touch
As sweet as midnight stroll
Lest life to pass me by
A’ shimmer ‘pon my soul

Pure eyes of supple gaze
So deeply call my mind
To spring blessed feathered days
Lo’ promises to find

Soft lips a’ fall my own
As delicate a rose
Of heaven’s holy throne
O’er whispered breezes flows

My love, o’ take me so
Relieve my tortured fire
This pleading heart doth show
Tis thee my true desire

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Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2020 at 4:03 AM - A tender and beautiful poem, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Chris Green January 28, 2020 at 7:33 AM Thank you my friend for all of your kindness

Eve Roper January 27, 2020 at 4:27 PM Beautiful verse , with deep emotion, great flow. I need to take lessons from you. Hugs Eve Chris Green January 28, 2020 at 7:33 AM Thank you so very much Eve.

Hello There January 27, 2020 at 10:03 AM Love this Pleading Heart and the poetic vibes of times past. Just my cup of tea ~ A fave :) Chris Green January 27, 2020 at 10:16 AM Thank you HT for your kind words. I am happy you liked this one.

Connie Marcum Wong January 26, 2020 at 9:35 PM Romance dances in this piece that could have come from the renaissance Chris. Thank you for the cheer you inject into every poem. Lovely! xxoo Chris Green January 27, 2020 at 7:55 AM Thank you Connie for always being so nice to me.

Ronald D Thompson January 26, 2020 at 5:29 PM Excellent as always Chris. Good to see the pen flowing. Best wishes...Ron :) Chris Green January 27, 2020 at 7:54 AM Thank so much my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos January 26, 2020 at 7:20 AM Awesome Chris, your poems are like blissful dreams - you are definitely the King of love poems. Blessings, Jennifer. Chris Green January 27, 2020 at 7:54 AM Thank you for your kind words Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues January 25, 2020 at 4:45 PM Within the limits of six syllable lines, a lovely poem! Chris Green January 27, 2020 at 7:54 AM Thanks so much again Kim.

Sunlite Wanter January 25, 2020 at 11:57 AM A Chris Green "touching the heart" original! Chris Green January 27, 2020 at 7:53 AM Thanks so very much Sunlite.

Charles Messina January 24, 2020 at 11:34 PM Doth the words are spoken in a Shakespearian way.. and I doth , enjoy the read. Very Nice, Chris! Have a great weekend .. C.M. Chris Green January 27, 2020 at 7:53 AM Thanks so much my friend. Happy you liked this one.

Juliet Ligon January 24, 2020 at 11:18 PM Enticing descriptions. How lovely. Chris Green January 27, 2020 at 7:52 AM Thank you so very much Juliet

Heidi Sands January 24, 2020 at 6:29 PM I love how you wrote this one. It has an elegant, enchanting feel to it as if being in a beautiful ballroom. Took me away, Chris. Nice other places. Well written :) Chris Green January 27, 2020 at 7:52 AM Thank you Heidi for your always kinds words to me.

Kim Rodrigues January 24, 2020 at 6:16 PM Your poetry, your own...so many ways and words to your romantic collection! Chris Green January 27, 2020 at 7:52 AM Thanks so much Kim.

Mystic Rose Rose January 24, 2020 at 5:35 PM Beautiful poetry, like a running stream, straight into my senses it goes. Thank you Chris. Chris Green January 27, 2020 at 7:51 AM Thank you so much Pixie

Sandra Adams January 24, 2020 at 5:28 PM wow... this one has such an archaic feel to it... like something shakespeare would write.... playing with older language to achieve this? if so it worked... your talent always shines in everything you pen...you are amazing my friend... hugs Chris Green January 24, 2020 at 5:31 PM Yep, just playing around with words. Glad you liked it. Thank you so very much Sandy for always being so kind to me.