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'pleading Eyes'

his eyes implored for some warmth and laughter
the stench he carried around
told another story


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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/21/2012 2:43:00 PM

Fantastic story Wilma; the yearning and reality sure don't go together.

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/26/2011 1:52:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Wilma! Kim

Robert Pettit

Date: 12/24/2011 11:41:00 PM

Described so well, I can almost smell the words. Good kimo, and congratulations on winning with it.

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/23/2011 9:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest, Wilma.. My best wishes for a perfect Christmas with family and friends. Love, Annalise

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/22/2011 7:12:00 PM

Very good poem and glad to see it made the winner list, Wilma. Thanks for your blog comment to me and for being such a great poetry pal! Luv, Andrea

Kash Poet

Date: 12/22/2011 5:02:00 PM

Congratulations Wilma on your win.Enjoyed it first time around.

Greg Stanley

Date: 12/22/2011 4:05:00 PM

Wilma, very nice, congratulations on your win. Season’s Greetings and Merry Christmas.

Bob Quigley

Date: 12/22/2011 2:23:00 PM

Well written Wilma. Congratulations

David Williams

Date: 12/22/2011 2:20:00 PM

Wilma congrats on your win, new photo eh, hope you will enter my first contest..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/22/2011 11:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the Chris D. Aechtner "Kimo" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/21/2011 5:06:00 PM

Lol! This reminds me of the M & M candy and Pretzel Commercial...the one featuring the guy with the "hungry" eyes... Great job, Wilma! Merry Christmas and an exciting New Year filled with blessings and all the good things you wish for, dear! You deserve it, my friend. Love, Annalise Thanks for the visit!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/20/2011 9:54:00 AM

You sometimes have to take a step backwards from the stench but you never know what sad story those pleading eyes have. My heart goes out to those who are in need.

Wilma Neels
Date: 12/20/2011 8:13:00 PM

I totally agree with you Phyl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/19/2011 4:18:00 PM

Hmmm, that stinky guy!!! haha Was this for a contest,Wilma? You could put it for the odor contest!!

Kash Poet

Date: 12/18/2011 10:21:00 AM

Very nice Kimo here Wilma.Enjoyed reading it.Best wishes for the contest.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/18/2011 9:46:00 AM

ahh, sometimes there is definitely more than meets the eye-- the nose, knows-- ok why am I in such a corny mood? lack of sleep to blame! Seriously missy-- this is so true! Sometimes we really just have to trust our other senses, the eyes can deceive.... wish you all the best in Chris' kontest :) mwahugs!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 12/18/2011 11:42:00 AM

Oh! I forgot to add in my reply to your komment to your komment to mine, 'korny' haha...be glad i didn't spell Chris' name as Khris... Okkkkkk really sleeping now mwahugs

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/18/2011 7:55:00 AM

lol ... Airfreshener needed???? I love the Kimo form but I always shy away form it, don't ask why lol..... xoox all day and night for you... Michael

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