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'pleading Eyes'

his eyes implored for some warmth and laughter the stench he carried around told another story
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/21/2012 2:43:00 PM
Fantastic story Wilma; the yearning and reality sure don't go together.
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Date: 12/26/2011 1:52:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Wilma! Kim
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Date: 12/24/2011 11:41:00 PM
Described so well, I can almost smell the words. Good kimo, and congratulations on winning with it.
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Date: 12/23/2011 9:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Wilma.. My best wishes for a perfect Christmas with family and friends. Love, Annalise
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Date: 12/22/2011 7:12:00 PM
Very good poem and glad to see it made the winner list, Wilma. Thanks for your blog comment to me and for being such a great poetry pal! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/22/2011 5:02:00 PM
Congratulations Wilma on your win.Enjoyed it first time around.
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Date: 12/22/2011 4:05:00 PM
Wilma, very nice, congratulations on your win. Season’s Greetings and Merry Christmas.
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Date: 12/22/2011 2:23:00 PM
Well written Wilma. Congratulations
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Date: 12/22/2011 2:20:00 PM
Wilma congrats on your win, new photo eh, hope you will enter my first contest..David
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Date: 12/22/2011 11:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Chris D. Aechtner "Kimo" contest Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2011 5:06:00 PM
Lol! This reminds me of the M & M candy and Pretzel Commercial...the one featuring the guy with the "hungry" eyes... Great job, Wilma! Merry Christmas and an exciting New Year filled with blessings and all the good things you wish for, dear! You deserve it, my friend. Love, Annalise Thanks for the visit!
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Date: 12/20/2011 9:54:00 AM
You sometimes have to take a step backwards from the stench but you never know what sad story those pleading eyes have. My heart goes out to those who are in need.
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Wilma Neels
Date: 12/20/2011 8:13:00 PM
I totally agree with you Phyl
Date: 12/19/2011 4:18:00 PM
Hmmm, that stinky guy!!! haha Was this for a contest,Wilma? You could put it for the odor contest!!
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Date: 12/18/2011 10:21:00 AM
Very nice Kimo here Wilma.Enjoyed reading it.Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 12/18/2011 9:46:00 AM
ahh, sometimes there is definitely more than meets the eye-- the nose, knows-- ok why am I in such a corny mood? lack of sleep to blame! Seriously missy-- this is so true! Sometimes we really just have to trust our other senses, the eyes can deceive.... wish you all the best in Chris' kontest :) mwahugs!!
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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 12/18/2011 11:42:00 AM
Oh! I forgot to add in my reply to your komment to your komment to mine, 'korny' haha...be glad i didn't spell Chris' name as Khris... Okkkkkk really sleeping now mwahugs
Date: 12/18/2011 7:55:00 AM
lol ... Airfreshener needed???? I love the Kimo form but I always shy away form it, don't ask why lol..... xoox all day and night for you... Michael
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