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Playing With Fire

Playing with fire ...like night magicians playing with fire till dawn needn't tell but crowd masquerades seeking sources to revitalize their wands. For: Poet Destroyer's "Playing With Fire" contest.

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Date: 12/10/2013 4:19:00 AM
Congrats on the win,
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 12/10/2013 9:23:00 AM
Thank you, Ram.
Date: 12/9/2013 5:49:00 PM
Abdulhafeez, , Thanks for understanding and having patience with me. I'm sending hugs from the bottom of my heart. I am very sorry I kept all my winning poems on standby. LOL, Had a MAD headache. wink! wink! .... Congratulations.... If you have time, please enjoy my Hot & Cute blog.. Called. "Fire Sister." take care and enjoy this win -- xox.LINDA
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 12/10/2013 9:22:00 AM
Thank you, Linda.
Date: 12/9/2013 9:48:00 AM
Lovely imagery, my dear. Captivating write.
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 12/10/2013 9:21:00 AM
Thank you, Eileen.
Date: 12/5/2013 8:48:00 AM
very nice tanka AO....best wishes
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 12/10/2013 9:20:00 AM
Thank you. Joseph.
Date: 12/4/2013 3:51:00 PM
Nicely done for her contest!!
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 12/10/2013 9:18:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 11/27/2013 4:51:00 PM
hi AO I agree with you better as you wrote it clever poem well written kudos Shadow x smile hug
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 12/10/2013 9:16:00 AM
Thank you Shadow.
Date: 11/26/2013 10:31:00 PM
Line 5 is synonymous with saying "to redeem their magic wands". Perhaps collocates? But I prefer using the former here. Thanks for being there.
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