Barbara Gorelick Poet Rhyme

Playing With Colors

The subtle beauty of the Aurora Borealis
     So stunning it almost takes your breath away
     An avalanche of quickly changing colors
     As if fairy sprites in delighted mischief play





For the Aurora
 and Avalanche contest

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Skat A April 30, 2015 at 7:48 PM BARBARA, Congratulations on your win. SKAT

Andrea Dietrich April 28, 2015 at 4:55 PM well, here is one of yours that got an HM too. This contest was a very difficult one. I did not even try it. So I applaud you for the cleverness you used coming up with this one.

Poet Destroyer A April 28, 2015 at 2:51 PM Barbara, Congratulations on your "Aurora And Avalanche" win.... LINDA

Sandra Haight April 27, 2015 at 9:02 PM Nice images in so few words, Barbara. Congratulations on your win! Sandra

Eve Roper April 27, 2015 at 2:28 PM Very beautiful Barbara, a 7! Congratulations on your win! Blessings Eve

Debbie Guzzi April 27, 2015 at 12:00 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Paul Schneiter April 5, 2015 at 10:57 AM In just four lines you create an unforgettable image and experience—awesome! Beautifully done, Barbara.

Wilma Neels March 13, 2015 at 2:14 PM Barbara, you captured the theme perfectly with this beauty ;) hope you will enjoy the weekend

Joseph May March 8, 2015 at 8:54 PM In just 4 lines you captured the theme...well written....best wishes

Emile Pinet March 8, 2015 at 1:39 PM This poem is pure fantasy and flows off the tongue like syrup while leaving a sweet after taste....delicious! Emile. #7

Sandra Haight March 8, 2015 at 8:35 AM Barbara, I like the way you use both "aurora" and "avalanche" to poetically image the Aurora Borealis, and using avalanche as an adjective. Brilliant! Best of luck in the contest. Sandra

Carolyn Devonshire March 5, 2015 at 1:49 PM Dear LNC, What a creative approach to the contest! I love the way you use the "avalanche" of colors and the mischievous fairy sprites. Best wishes in the contest! Love you always, Carolyn

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty March 5, 2015 at 4:33 AM Mightiest avalanche and most beautiful Aurora painted with only four lines.Brilliant Barbara. God bless you.Love>Your friend rajat

Connie Marcum Wong March 4, 2015 at 9:57 PM Oh Barbara, this is so lovely. They are unforgettable to view. You captured their capricious spirit so well in your poem. I hope to see this one at the top!

Sara Kendrick March 4, 2015 at 1:56 PM Enjoyed reading your contest entry.. Reads like a winner to me..The aurora borealis must be a beautiful sight when seen in person..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Ilene Bauer March 4, 2015 at 11:09 AM this is charming and delightful, barbara!