Playing Children

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rainfall hoot call warm sheets slush streets All day Kids play Some sled They spread Some ski With glee Some skate The slate Snowballs Catch balls much fun quick run dream youth tight truth play smooth talk soothe room floor dance more plain lore loud roar pack joy dear boy real toy feel cloy Written: January 25, 2023 Brian Strand No 1175 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Hilo Poet

Date: 1/28/2023 11:23:00 PM

Intricacies favor your indelible quill, Lassad, a pleasant footle, all my best, Aloha William

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/27/2023 12:24:00 PM

What a fun/creative Footle rhyme. Also a cute picture. I really enjoyed this write. Have a great weekend..............

Valsa George

Date: 1/27/2023 5:18:00 AM

Love your rhyming footles, dear Lasaad. Childhood is for play and children enjoy the winter games. So well crafted..... Congratulations on your win dear friend.

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/26/2023 8:48:00 AM

Dear Lasaad, your delightfully animated footles are filled with such playful joy. Truly enjoyed your wonderful string of rhyming childhood fun. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/26/2023 7:29:00 AM

Every pair--full of action--as kids always are.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/25/2023 10:52:00 PM

Cute. Great rhyme and rhythm.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 1/25/2023 7:20:00 PM

Oh this is sweet! I love each and every single one, so cute!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/25/2023 6:49:00 PM

Your wonderful footles evoke pleasant sensations and nostalgic memories, Lasaad. The lovely picture is a fine companion. Best of wishes for the contest, my friend. :)