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Playing Children

rainfall
hoot call

warm sheets
slush streets

All day
Kids play

Some sled
They spread

Some ski
With glee

Some skate
The slate

Snowballs
Catch balls

much fun
quick run

dream youth
tight truth

play smooth
talk soothe

room floor
dance more

plain lore
loud roar

pack joy
dear boy

real toy
feel cloy

Written: January 25, 2023

Brian Strand No 1175 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Hilo Poet Date: 1/28/2023 11:23:00 PM Intricacies favor your indelible quill, Lassad, a pleasant footle, all my best, Aloha William Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/27/2023 12:24:00 PM What a fun/creative Footle rhyme. Also a cute picture. I really enjoyed this write. Have a great weekend.............. Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 1/27/2023 5:18:00 AM Love your rhyming footles, dear Lasaad. Childhood is for play and children enjoy the winter games. So well crafted..... Congratulations on your win dear friend. Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 1/26/2023 8:48:00 AM Dear Lasaad, your delightfully animated footles are filled with such playful joy. Truly enjoyed your wonderful string of rhyming childhood fun. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 1/26/2023 7:29:00 AM Every pair--full of action--as kids always are. Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/25/2023 10:52:00 PM Cute. Great rhyme and rhythm. Login to Reply

Bj Legros Kelley Date: 1/25/2023 7:20:00 PM Oh this is sweet! I love each and every single one, so cute! Login to Reply

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 1/25/2023 6:49:00 PM Your wonderful footles evoke pleasant sensations and nostalgic memories, Lasaad. The lovely picture is a fine companion. Best of wishes for the contest, my friend. :) Login to Reply