Elai Cee Poet Free verse

Playful Love-Fate

The beat of a heart moving fast
Reaching out the last breath can breathe
The palms are getting cold
It becomes pale willing to fall

Years have past for thousand lies
With false smiles and false love
For he knew to count different me
Tear my dreams and future for him

A whisper whispering me to kill my own self
After to know the biggest revelation came
The fearless other one that he loved was...
A girl that I love most and brings my blood

How can I live with her?
How can I turn my eyes to her?
The loathing spirit pushing myself
For them who put evil on my head!

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Richard Lamoureux June 28, 2013 at 7:35 AM Definately pinches. Well expressed!

Emily Pascale June 11, 2013 at 5:33 PM This is great, a clear depiction of your pain. wonderfully written Elai Cee June 23, 2013 at 8:55 AM yes Emily... thank u for the visit

John Posey May 20, 2013 at 5:42 PM Your work is well constructed and pleasant reading... You capture the spirit of the deceit we sometimes find in a painful love.... Jake Elai Cee May 24, 2013 at 4:55 AM thank you John

Poet Tacito May 15, 2013 at 8:57 AM This is very strong & hard hitting. Excellent job! Elai Cee May 16, 2013 at 12:17 AM Thanks Drake!

Kevin Callaghan May 11, 2013 at 1:23 PM hello my friend we live to learn i think to acknowledge the pain speeds the cure i hope this helps thank you Elai Cee May 20, 2013 at 3:40 AM thanks kevin

Elai Cee May 10, 2013 at 11:51 AM Hi poets!!! Hope to enjoy reading this and can give something that pinch your heart ! ....keep smiling---------elai