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Dolpins 

The rhythm of the sea, lull up and down, while seamen stand out on the starboard watching the sea light up like a watercolor painting. Movements and chatter sounds sing to one another like a flock of birds on tree boughs. Entourage of Dolphins in a watery playground, elegant and slick, gray, long body break upon the surface discovering the sight in the distance not duller, but brighter. Flickers of light around when uncover a graceful performance in fluid form as they swim in the silence, a whimsical waltz by brothers, mothers, and lovers a spectacular show of natural wonder. Dolphins, highly intelligent mammals, a part of the whale family, are benignly creatures, playful swimming alongside ships, they live throughout the world in a cerulean depth of briny deep-sea. 12/31/2017
'P'' Contest, New Or Old Poetry Contest 7. playful Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 10/5/2021 8:14:00 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my "P" contest with this beautifully penned poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 10/4/2021 1:38:00 PM
This is "fluid" beauty celebrating one of my favorite sea creatures - the amazing, awesome dolphin! Congratulations on your win that flows like the waves! Blessings Eve!
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Date: 9/27/2021 8:51:00 PM
A minute study on the creature and a very beautiful narration! Great Work! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/27/2021 8:29:00 PM
Lovely piece, Eve! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 9/27/2021 1:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Eve, you penned a lovely poem, and you deserve it.
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Date: 9/27/2021 12:04:00 PM
such gorgeous creatures and they are so playful indeed:-) many congratulations on your win Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:43:00 AM
Congrats, Eve. Your winning poem is very graceful.
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Date: 3/3/2018 1:27:00 AM
Congratulations Eve. Tom
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Date: 1/1/2018 11:14:00 AM
Lovely poem, and great last line... Good luck in the contest...
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Date: 1/1/2018 10:34:00 AM
An awesome clever description of these beautiful mammals Eve; great imagery! Best of luck in the contest!~Che :)
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Date: 12/31/2017 10:15:00 PM
Such beauty in these words Eve! Lovely!!!! Beautiful creatures they are too!
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