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Let me tell you a story… A story about life, where Solitude gracefully glides into the room, wearing a loose fitting gown, draping her curvaceous form. Piously she takes her place at the table of life, she is surrounded by Faith, Hope, Despair, Vision, Reality, and Fantasy. Furtive Destiny is seated at the head of the table, shrouded in mystery. Faith is subdued, radiant, gracious and kind. Her reassuring smile gives life and courage to Hope. They share a unique friendship, if either of them departs, the other becomes reclusive. Hope shines in the spotlight with Faith. She dazzles with magic tricks; lighthearted yet fragile. She holds her breath so often I fear one day she may not catch it. Optimistic Faith, reminds Hope to breathe in and breathe out. Despair, clad in a dark cloak; averts his sullen glassy eyes. His temerity threatens and blind sights the spirit of Faith and Hope; vulnerable and frightened they reach out to Vision. Vision is creative, casting Faith and Hope in life’s productions; drawing back the curtain of blindness, revealing hopeful possibilities. Reality, a disciplinarian. He is strong and terse; building strength on the bedrock of truth. Discerning facts, sorting out fiction. Fantasy, a flighty temptress, playfully teases Reality who becomes uncomfortable; secretly he admires her, especially when Destiny leaves the room. Destiny holds the key to life’s fate. Confident and at times unforgiving; she never plays favorites. Wise, with the knowledge she solely possesses the power of our tomorrows. Reality is her soulmate, keeping a harmonious balance. There is talk they are involved, but Destiny does not reveal her private life. Date: April 19, 2022 For: Form N - Narrative - New Poems Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Theme: Life Grammar verified on P.S. Grammar check Placed 1st in contest

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Date: 5/9/2022 7:48:00 AM
Paulette, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Narrative, Let me tell you a story ... contest, blessings ~Constance
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/9/2022 8:39:00 AM
Thank you Constance~it was a wonderful journey for me; i enjoyed this opportunity. Blessings, Paulette
Date: 5/9/2022 6:01:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... so wisdom-filled. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. God bless you.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/9/2022 8:40:00 AM
Thank you Beata~I appreciate your stopping by to comment. :)Paulette
Date: 5/3/2022 4:51:00 PM
I found it humorous how Reality is admiring of Fantasy, especially when his soul mate Destiny leaves the room. A mot interesting tale of personification. Also I was struck by solitude being described so sexily!! makes me feel good since I love solitude a lot. congrats on your win for this most interesting story.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/3/2022 5:50:00 PM
Thank you Andrea~glad you enjoyed the personification, especially the sexy Solitude! :)Paulette
Date: 4/30/2022 3:05:00 PM
A FAV, and a great entry for the contest. Your personification of Faith, Hope, Despair, Vision, Reality, and Fantasy were very well described through your creative poetry, Paulette. Thanks for sharing, Bill
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/3/2022 5:51:00 PM
Thanks Bill~glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette
Date: 4/28/2022 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Creative" write. Today, be blessed with your win...........
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 4/28/2022 10:47:00 AM
Thank you Paula and a congratulations to you too! :)Paulette
Date: 4/28/2022 6:56:00 AM
"where Solitude gracefully glides into the room, wearing a loose fitting gown" - Wow! Great personification. Whole poem is beautiul. Congratulations!
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 4/28/2022 10:47:00 AM
Thank you Christuraj~I love to create personifications when I can. Glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette
Date: 4/26/2022 6:21:00 PM
A brilliant guiding prolific wisdom in the form of story, splendid, best wishes...regards Silpika
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 4/27/2022 12:57:00 PM
Thank you Silpika for your comments. :)Paulette
Date: 4/21/2022 3:40:00 AM
I thought this was to be in poetic form. You can easily do it that way.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/3/2022 4:52:00 PM
It was a narrative form, Victor. So rhymed or not, narrative can be a prose-like story.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 4/21/2022 6:56:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by Victor~according to the submission guidelines it did not have to be in rhyme. Thanks, Paulette

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