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Plastic Surgery - Inspired By Susan Ashley

PLASTIC SURGERY ~~~~~ The now senescent sands, lost beauty, suffering plastic surgery two tides a day. Back when, the tides revealed its beauty. Man, so remiss, it hasn't stayed that way. Metaphorically speaking, as sand can't age Biologically speaking, but its density, It increases, and quickly when storms rage From rock to mud, ongoing, relentlessly. ~~~~~~~~~~~
Re Susan's poem 'Chalice of Ambrosial Dreams', WHAT! were you thinking? https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/chalice_of_ambrosial_dreams_991815

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Date: 2/9/2018 8:30:00 AM
You were inspired by the stardust of Susan Ashley's poem...A great one indeed...Lovely take of the "senescent sands" All the best to you Mick
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Date: 2/9/2018 7:06:00 AM
Fantastic metaphor! :)
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/9/2018 7:13:00 AM
Fantastic comment, thanks Kim! ;-)

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