Plastic Paradise

Blake’s world in a grain of sand This plastic bottle in my hand Welcome to the new Fantasy Island Of plastic trash, a brave new land This tropical island, it's perfect for me Plastic parts and baggies floating on the sea Maybe melt it down and build homes for the needy or a giant vacation raft for the greedy With helipads, private yacht docks Big towering plastic wave blocks, Rubber beach, water bottle boardwalk Plastic vat-grown flesh of real livestock The morality of the cancer cell Substrate feeders, eating pell-mell The world’s becoming a garbage pail No thought to the inevitable And climate change serves their agenda well Because the human contribution’s debatable While they discuss warming, the cartel’s Strip malls and subdivisions continue to swell Doomed is the animal that craps its nest Any intelligent species should be distressed A problem that’s not yet addressed I’m not so sure we’ll pass the test History will certainly not treat us kind The obvious answer is easy to find We have turned a greedy eye blind To the inevitable impact of short-term design Of wild spaces, said Edward Abbey The world, and humankind’s necessity Without wild spaces, wild humans can’t be Which serves the moral absentees However, it does seem to me Abbey missed one fact that’s key There will always be crazies like me Who’d burn it down to set it free 4/9/16

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Date: 7/26/2016 9:05:00 AM
Tom, congratulations on your first place trophy. Your poem is an eye opener. All the best.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 7/26/2016 12:48:00 PM
Thank you, Sonia!
Date: 7/25/2016 12:57:00 AM
Excellent rant Tom, that I hope opens some eyes! My favorite line..."Doomed is the animal that craps its nest" Big congrats on your well deserved First Place! I'd love to see this a POTW! 7 ; )
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Tom Quigley
Date: 7/26/2016 12:48:00 PM
Thanks, Connie!
Date: 7/24/2016 7:58:00 PM
Congratulations, great poem
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Tom Quigley
Date: 7/24/2016 9:11:00 PM
Thanks, Tanis!
Date: 7/24/2016 6:52:00 PM
Yes, Tom...non-degradable garbage in the sea...and outer space too. Your poem brings the problem home. Your line, "No thought to the inevitable," really says a lot. Congrats on your well-deserved First Place win. Sandra
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Tom Quigley
Date: 7/24/2016 9:11:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra!
Date: 7/23/2016 7:50:00 AM
Congrats! my friend...on a well-deserved win...time to take out the trash!...god bless...^WW^
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Tom Quigley
Date: 7/23/2016 12:27:00 PM
:-) Yep! Thanks.
Date: 7/23/2016 1:02:00 AM
This brings us to think anew and again and again how we are responsible for the mess we are in. Congrats, beautifully said and well deserved. :) Sunita
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Tom Quigley
Date: 7/23/2016 12:27:00 PM
Thank you, Sunita!
Date: 7/23/2016 12:04:00 AM
Great write of garbage, Tom. A deserved win. ;-)
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Tom Quigley
Date: 7/23/2016 12:28:00 PM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 7/15/2016 3:15:00 AM
Someone once said if we don't take care of Earth, She won't take care of us.... Congrats Tom, for your WIN with this powerful piece!! ;-)
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Tom Quigley
Date: 7/15/2016 7:24:00 AM
Thanks, Teddy!
Date: 7/13/2016 2:26:00 PM
Plastic pollution everywhere the eye can see! Very powerful one Tom!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 7/15/2016 7:24:00 AM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 7/13/2016 12:43:00 PM
The more we are vocal and aware of what we are doing to scar our earth, let us pray ignorance will not be bliss, as it has in our past. Well done, Tim!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 7/15/2016 7:25:00 AM
Thank you, Carrie!
Date: 7/13/2016 1:01:00 AM
Tom, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for the support. Stop by and enjoy the sanity of my newest Blog "In Red's Silent Fury." Always & Forever WUV ~LINDA~
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Tom Quigley
Date: 7/13/2016 6:26:00 AM
Thank you, Linda!
Date: 4/10/2016 8:44:00 AM
This was conveyed eloquent, great work.......A.M.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/10/2016 10:21:00 AM
Thank you, Afolabi!
Date: 4/9/2016 7:43:00 PM
Rant on! Someday soon we're gonna be asking where did this s--t come from? Using anything that isn't biodegradable is nothing short of stupidity. I absolutely love the message and the poem. Peace my friend:)
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/10/2016 6:08:00 AM
Thanks, Daniel!
Date: 4/9/2016 7:42:00 PM
It conveys a valuable message. I do appreciate ur effort. Keep iit up..........with love
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/10/2016 6:08:00 AM
Thank you, Manmath!
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