Plants Dropping the Buds

The car rams into 
the inn screeching and crashing
Plants dropping their buds

June 8, 2018
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Gentry Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 11:12 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Gupta Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 11:23 PM
Thank you, Susan ...
Wolf Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 10:14 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Probir! ~ gershon
Gupta Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 11:23 PM
Thank you, Gershon ...
Poteet Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 11:54 AM
Now that is loud at its highest pitch. Good one Probir. Congratulations!kab
Gupta Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Thank you very much! ....
Talbot Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 8:11 PM
Great Magicicada, congratulations! Mick
Gupta Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 6:16 AM
Thank you, Mick ...
Lawless Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 5:55 PM
a very intriguing haiku Probir. From disaster to hope....congrats on your placement
Gupta Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 6:22 AM
Thank you, John
Pett Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 2:26 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Probir, great haiku. :))
Gupta Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 6:23 AM
Thank you, Roy ...
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June 15, 2018 at 12:56 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 1:17 PM
Thanks, Sunshine ...
Roper Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 11:47 AM
Back with podium congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve ~' *
Gupta Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 11:58 AM
Thanks, Eve ...
Sands Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 9:40 AM
Congratulations for your win Probir :)
Gupta Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 11:58 AM
Thank you ...
Poteet Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 8:48 AM
A powerful vibration going on here. Congrats on your win, Probir.
Gupta Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 12:01 PM
Reason to be glad and say thank you ...
La France Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 8:46 AM
Probir, congratulations on your placement in the contest with this wonderful Haiku. Hope all is well with you. Constance
Gupta Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 12:02 PM
Thank you, Constance ... by n large I am good ...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 8:41 AM
A visceral response to this one Probir, powerful affecting piece. Well done! Congratulations on your first place win in my contest! Thank you for your support! xomo :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 12:25 PM
You succeeded Probir. It could be hit or miss, you took a risk, it hit Bull's eye for me. A feast for my visual mind. :)
Gupta Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 12:11 PM
I attempted a journey from concrete to abstract ... Abstract in the sense that all the there lines are metaphorical leading to plurality of interpretation ... I am glad at the recognition ... Thank you so much, Maureen
Juman Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 2:46 AM
nie my friend
Gupta Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 7:21 AM
Thank you, Al Juman ...
Warrior Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 11:29 AM
Crash test buds...nicely done my friend...love & light Probir...^WW^
Gupta Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 7:24 AM
Than you, WW ...
Sands Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 9:53 AM
Great Haiku Probir! :)
Roper Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 8:04 PM
I could see the whole show from my seat, Probir.. the imagery is great... Hugs dear friend
Gupta Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 8:30 AM
Thanks a lot, Eve ...
Trifiatis Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 1:53 PM
Being a bud lover I find it tragic my friend, Probir, however, it is a great Haiku!
Gupta Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 8:31 AM
What else the buds can do ... Thank you ...
Salehi Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 1:45 PM
Great haiku...
Salehi Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 7:23 PM
You bet...
Gupta Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 8:33 AM
Thank you, Pashang ...
Andresen Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 12:18 PM
- A great one, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 8:33 AM
Thank you, Sunshine ...
May Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 9:49 AM
Very nice haiku Probir
Gupta Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 8:35 AM
Thank you, Joseph ...
Canerdy Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 9:21 AM
Sounds like several news stories I've heard just lately, Probir. Well done! Janice
Gupta Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 8:40 AM
Right, Janice ... The plants cannot afford to hold the buds to blossom at the everyday screech and clash ... Thank you...
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