Planted

The experience
of you
germinates

a hungry 
hungry little root

winding it's way
inside me

so warming

you must be seed
and sun





circa 2006

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/12/2018 11:17:00 PM

An oldie AND a goodie. Sweet! :) gw

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/12/2018 11:37:00 PM

Thank you! I had completely forgotten this one. Surprised myself :)

Jack Ellison

Date: 4/11/2018 3:24:00 PM

Which spring was this... 'tis a little late this year... ya think!!! Lovsies, Happy Happy Jack XOX

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/12/2018 8:23:00 AM

We could have two feet of snow, I count my blessings ;) HUGS

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/11/2018 3:04:00 PM

Reminds me of spring with daffs and blossom starting to bloom. Tom.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/12/2018 8:22:00 AM

Lovely :) xomo!

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/11/2018 2:50:00 PM

A little sea and rain too...Lovely concept...All the best Maureen...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/12/2018 8:21:00 AM

Thank you Arturo, a lovely day to you xomo