Planning More Garden Spaces

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I had three lawn spaces around my house, which we bought over last New Years.  Two of them are now gardens, and I'm currently digging up the third.  The back yard produced a lot of zucchinis and pumpkins, and some tomatoes, peas and radishes.  The main front lawn has beans, lettuce, cabbage, radishes, and maybe 1-2 okra plants growing.  I plan to put 2-4 varieties of grapes in the space I'm working now, maybe with a structure connecting over a footpath (to the front door) to the eaves of my house, possibly to create a relaxing shaded area.

Zoning by micro-climates my
Yards' spaces, and then
Xeriscaping them to conserve
Water because of the drought, I can
Visualize neat straight furrows
(Under colorful vines
Trailing red, green, and purple grapes)
Saturated with various seedlings:
Radishes, squashes, sprouts, etc.
Quietly absorbing sunlight, and
Pushing roots deeper into my
Organically amended soil.
Nasturtiums, previously planted,
Misdirect insects away from my plants.
Ladybugs, and other predators, help
Keep down the hostiles that got through.
Jumping forward from Spring to Fall,
I can imagine picking tomatoes from the vines,
Harvesting football-sized zucchinis, 
Gathering various root vegetables, and
Fruits from bushes and trees.
Eating unwashed sweet peas 
Directly from their pods.
Cooking pies from mixed berries I grew;
Baking pumpkin bread or zucchini bread.
Agonizing again over what to plant next year.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 10/18/2015 12:19:00 AM
Congrats Mark, well written, ...Seren
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 10/18/2015 11:17:00 PM
Thanks. I did a similar piece earlier, but from A to Z, also about gardening.
Date: 10/16/2015 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Mark , a 7!!
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 10/17/2015 9:49:00 PM
Thanks Eve
Date: 10/15/2015 9:49:00 PM
Mark, Nice to see you on John's winning list. Congratulations on your win. ** Love SKAT
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 10/16/2015 12:57:00 AM
Barely made it on that one. Thanks.
Date: 10/15/2015 4:20:00 AM
I wish I had more time to spend in the garden but its been a tough time this year but we have plants for planting and bulbs ready for spring:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 10/16/2015 12:58:00 AM
Just planted some grape vines; still digging up the last lawn.
Date: 10/15/2015 1:58:00 AM
Congrats on superb win Mark with this wonderful write!
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 10/16/2015 12:58:00 AM
Thanks Dr. S.
Date: 10/14/2015 8:05:00 PM
Mark, this reads almost like a hymn in praise of the cycles of life. Nicely done, them poem and from the sound of it .... the garden. Thanks for entering the contest
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 10/16/2015 1:00:00 AM
Gardening has been on my mind a lot. Just planted some grape vines last week, and am digging up my last lawn to put in squash varieties.
Date: 9/30/2015 7:51:00 PM
I wish you were anticipating, not agonizing, because you are blessed with the joy of 3 wonderful gardens. Not only does talent show in your wonderful poem, but in your veges and fruits. I can't help but wonder where you live. I am in USA (Virginia), an apartment dweller, but you can bet my balcony is a garden. Thoroughly enjoyed your poem ... CayCay
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 10/2/2015 9:39:00 PM
I live on the Monterey Peninsula, in Salinas California. The Salinas valley feeds a significant % of the USA and exports heavily too. Thanks for commenting. I did an earlier etheree with a similar theme.
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