Planet Zeus

He landed on the other world and knew
his time on planet Earth was truly through;
the place he'd come in time to call his home
was full of strangers, pastures new to roam.

Ten moons were visible  that starry night,
the sky was red, and all the land was white,
such lakes the astronaut had never seen,
and not a single plant or tree was green.

The others greeted him and asked of Earth
(a place they'd left behind but known since birth);
he smiled as flying horses crossed the sky,
and sat beside the girl who'd caught his eye...

He slept beneath a thousand shooting stars,
so glad he'd chosen Zeus instead of Mars!

written 1st July for William Kekaula's Most Beautiful Sonnet contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Babcock Avatar
July 12, 2019 at 10:37 PM
Love your imagination on this poem. Hope all is well with you. Busy summer helping son build a deck. love phyl
Rodrigues Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 1:29 PM
I love this! Imaginative!
Proxenos Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 12:50 PM
What an amazing write and what a lucky astronaut to have experienced this delightful escapade! Zeus is my favourite - we had a beautiful alsation whom we named Zeus. Hugs, Jennifer.
Rose  Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 2:31 PM
Nice to read your poetry once again Jack, have a great day .
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