Dan Kearley Poet Rhyme

Planet of Love

Gazing upon the earth that sits before my eyes
I think of all the trash,and the pollution filled skies
Hatred that ravaged lives,in every single city
Causing me distress,and a heart full of pity
Pride,and greed,that filled the minds of so many
I hope the people of this new world,can coexists without any

Standing on this shore with its beautiful clear blue water
In a temperature thats so perfect,never seeming to get hotter
On a planet full of people with nobody shouting orders
Living all as one,on a united planet with no borders
We spend all our days,in a thankfulness for leaving the earth
Building a planet of love,giving it our all for everything that it's worth


Contest:A New World
Dan Kearley:5-2-12

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Laura Breidenthal December 10, 2013 at 11:49 PM I'm looking forward to not a new world, but a better and revitalized one, where love conquers all and violence and pollution ceases. Very beautiful and hopeful poem.

Sukmawati Komala September 28, 2012 at 1:22 AM this is awesome Dan..enjoy reading your great write this afternoon:)) thanks for your nice works:) SK

Jasonpoet Boyd July 29, 2012 at 2:42 PM Nice dream.

Robert Pettit June 8, 2012 at 12:50 PM At the present moment, those exoplanets astronomers keep discovering are too far away for us to conveniently reach. We have to preserve and upkeep the planet we are living on right now. Good work.

Doris Culverhouse June 5, 2012 at 8:55 PM I was wondering where you were?? ya know which planet? great work....it is hard for me to see why people have to be so destructive.

Carma Sanderson June 4, 2012 at 1:30 AM "Beautifully Said, And So True N Genuine. All We Need Is Love... Carma"

Richard Palmer May 25, 2012 at 11:18 AM sell me an acre,lol

Ivy Vresk May 23, 2012 at 4:28 AM after reading your poem I am ready to face the world and continue to dream about planet of love,thank you ,your planet of love is all ready here and I am proud to be able to enjoy it becase you made it posible for me,thank you Dan,one love,Ivy

Chelsy Gonzales May 22, 2012 at 6:26 PM you have real talent... im loving your work

John Loving Iii May 22, 2012 at 3:47 PM it'll never happen without divine intervention.

Carol Eastman May 17, 2012 at 8:07 AM Well written. Good read. Fits the contest perfectly.

Carol Eastman May 17, 2012 at 8:07 AM Well written. Good read. Fits the contest perfectly.

Elizabeth Wesley May 14, 2012 at 8:24 PM Hi Dan, lots to think about in your poem. We read of all the disgusting state of thing in the forst stanza then it all seems to be healed in the second. We certainly have that time to look forward to dear friend. My best wishes for the contest! Luv, Lizzie

Jasonpoet Boyd May 12, 2012 at 6:00 AM Utopian dreams are well worth dreaming. But it is this earth that we need to change this is ours and the mistakes are ours so some how we must correct them. I do enjoy this poem it is a wonderful dream. Thank you

Carol Sunshine Brown May 10, 2012 at 11:06 AM Congratulations on your placement in Tracie's "A New World" contest Dan. Love, Carol

Anne-Lise Andresen May 10, 2012 at 10:53 AM Congrats on your win Dan....bravo !!!! :)+:)+:)+:)+:)+:) - Well done my f.e.f. Anne-Lise

Bob Quigley May 10, 2012 at 8:23 AM I want to go there Dan. Nice work.

David Williams May 10, 2012 at 7:19 AM Dan congrats on your win..David

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 10, 2012 at 6:43 AM Congratulations on your winning piece Dan xx

Dan Kearley May 9, 2012 at 10:57 PM Thank you all! I'm so happy that you all Love my planet of Love.. :o)

Cindy Lu May 9, 2012 at 4:22 PM very profound thoughts, expressions make your imagery and poetry very meaningful. I've missed you Dan. Cindy

David Williams May 8, 2012 at 7:02 AM Dan like your new world, good luck..David

Harry Horsman May 8, 2012 at 5:33 AM brilliant Dan, really enjoyed. if only, would be the perfect world. good luck in the contest. harry

Pace Ink-U-Script May 7, 2012 at 8:01 PM Absolutely love this piece Dan!! great imagery here...love the visual..its so calmly.

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet May 7, 2012 at 2:42 AM Wonderful write ..I love your new world....

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