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Planet of Love

Gazing upon the earth that sits before my eyes I think of all the trash,and the pollution filled skies Hatred that ravaged lives,in every single city Causing me distress,and a heart full of pity Pride,and greed,that filled the minds of so many I hope the people of this new world,can coexists without any Standing on this shore with its beautiful clear blue water In a temperature thats so perfect,never seeming to get hotter On a planet full of people with nobody shouting orders Living all as one,on a united planet with no borders We spend all our days,in a thankfulness for leaving the earth Building a planet of love,giving it our all for everything that it's worth
Contest:A New World Dan Kearley:5-2-12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/10/2013 11:49:00 PM
I'm looking forward to not a new world, but a better and revitalized one, where love conquers all and violence and pollution ceases. Very beautiful and hopeful poem.
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Date: 9/28/2012 1:22:00 AM
this is awesome Dan..enjoy reading your great write this afternoon:)) thanks for your nice works:) SK
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Date: 7/29/2012 2:42:00 PM
Nice dream.
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Date: 6/8/2012 12:50:00 PM
At the present moment, those exoplanets astronomers keep discovering are too far away for us to conveniently reach. We have to preserve and upkeep the planet we are living on right now. Good work.
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Date: 6/5/2012 8:55:00 PM
I was wondering where you were?? ya know which planet? great work....it is hard for me to see why people have to be so destructive.
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Date: 6/4/2012 1:30:00 AM
"Beautifully Said, And So True N Genuine. All We Need Is Love... Carma"
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Date: 5/25/2012 11:18:00 AM
sell me an acre,lol
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Date: 5/23/2012 4:28:00 AM
after reading your poem I am ready to face the world and continue to dream about planet of love,thank you ,your planet of love is all ready here and I am proud to be able to enjoy it becase you made it posible for me,thank you Dan,one love,Ivy
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Date: 5/22/2012 6:26:00 PM
you have real talent... im loving your work
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Date: 5/22/2012 3:47:00 PM
it'll never happen without divine intervention.
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Date: 5/17/2012 8:07:00 AM
Well written. Good read. Fits the contest perfectly.
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Date: 5/17/2012 8:07:00 AM
Well written. Good read. Fits the contest perfectly.
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Date: 5/14/2012 8:24:00 PM
Hi Dan, lots to think about in your poem. We read of all the disgusting state of thing in the forst stanza then it all seems to be healed in the second. We certainly have that time to look forward to dear friend. My best wishes for the contest! Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 5/12/2012 6:00:00 AM
Utopian dreams are well worth dreaming. But it is this earth that we need to change this is ours and the mistakes are ours so some how we must correct them. I do enjoy this poem it is a wonderful dream. Thank you
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Date: 5/10/2012 11:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Tracie's "A New World" contest Dan. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/10/2012 10:53:00 AM
Congrats on your win Dan....bravo !!!! :)+:)+:)+:)+:)+:) - Well done my f.e.f. Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/10/2012 8:23:00 AM
I want to go there Dan. Nice work.
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Date: 5/10/2012 7:19:00 AM
Dan congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/10/2012 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning piece Dan xx
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Date: 5/9/2012 10:57:00 PM
Thank you all! I'm so happy that you all Love my planet of Love.. :o)
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Date: 5/9/2012 4:22:00 PM
very profound thoughts, expressions make your imagery and poetry very meaningful. I've missed you Dan. Cindy
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Date: 5/8/2012 7:02:00 AM
Dan like your new world, good luck..David
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Date: 5/8/2012 5:33:00 AM
brilliant Dan, really enjoyed. if only, would be the perfect world. good luck in the contest. harry
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Date: 5/7/2012 9:00:00 PM
Lovely thoughts.........enjoyed!!
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Date: 5/7/2012 8:01:00 PM
Absolutely love this piece Dan!! great imagery here...love the visual..its so calmly.
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