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Planet Inspiration

Seize chances that change shape as we reach for them Attain steam that rises like an uphill train Toil through the colorless surface of work Uncouple the space harness of self doubt Rejoice in the seasonal landscape that grips imagination Nourish civility's charm, ethereal, like the ash rings of Saturn Composed: June 1, 2021

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 3/6/2023 6:56:00 PM

The beginning verbs of each sentence interested me since I just joined a gym. Seizing my chance to go. Rejoicing in the idea I could become healthier. Toiling through the brutal exercise classes. Nourishing my success with a cookie. Your last line was sparkly. I love your poems and hope to write like you someday.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/6/2023 7:44:00 PM

Your kind words have made my day Marikate. Thank you. I've read some your postings. There's no need to follow anyone other than your own poetical voice, which soars well as is. Sincerest appreciation for your stop by + note. Cheers Brian

Jan Allison

Date: 11/21/2021 1:13:00 PM

What a lovely acrostic Brian, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/21/2021 1:27:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. Be well. Brian

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/21/2021 10:30:00 AM

So lovely and inspirational, Brian. Congratulations on your win.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/21/2021 1:29:00 PM

Hello Evelyn Thank you for your kind remarks. Your entry was stellar - a clear winner. Continued good fortune as you pen poems. Cheers, Brian

Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/20/2021 11:07:00 PM

A Beautiful acrostic on Saturn. Congratulations!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/21/2021 6:06:00 AM

Thank you, Christuraj. You are consistently kind in your recognition of posted poems. Cheers Brian

Matt Caliri

Date: 11/20/2021 7:08:00 PM

Congrats on getting 2nd place in my poetry contest from 6 months ago. Sorry it took so long. You writing truly stood out, particularly in how human the subjects was, while vaguely referencing a planet at the end. Loved it. The most creative approach.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/21/2021 6:04:00 AM

Thanks very much Matt. I must admit that I had forgotten about this entry in your Planet Inspiration competition. I appreciate your thoughtful evaluation. Best wishes, Brian

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/18/2021 7:03:00 AM

I like this because it doesn’t feel like an Acrostic. I’m not a big fan of this form.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/18/2021 8:20:00 AM

Thank you, Richard. This is my first Acrostic. Hopefully, my pen will improve. Best wishes, Brian

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/8/2021 4:18:00 AM

Wonderful. Enjoyed and wish you a win. God bless you, Love, Gina

Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/8/2021 5:41:00 AM

Thank you, Gina. So thoughtful of you to post supportive comments. All the best, Brian

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/6/2021 6:59:00 AM

Beautiful. I read your other poems too. They are great.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/6/2021 10:27:00 AM

Greetings Christuraj, I most appreciate your kindness in commenting affirmatively. Perhaps you'll look at some of my poems on spring + children to offset my darker pieces? Sincere good wishes, Brian

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/5/2021 6:22:00 PM

Dear Brian, your wonderful pen captures Saturn's nature but also captures that which inspires human nature as well. I admire your creative flow and adore "Rejoice in the seasonal landscape that grips imagination". Your poem sparkles with deep imaginative artistry, my friend. A brilliant acrostic. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/5/2021 6:34:00 PM

Hello Susan, Many thanks for your detailed + affirming response to my submission. My first attempt at an Acrostic poem so there's room for improvement. You are most kind in your praise. Best wishes + good health always, Brian

Juliet Ligon

Date: 6/4/2021 10:04:00 PM

I like how you used the planet's attributes to draw inspiration.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/5/2021 6:00:00 AM

Thanks very much. I tend not to write Acrostic pieces but I gave this contest a whirl. Perhaps the planet's physical characteristics should have been highlighted + not passed, however. Probably lacking there. I appreciate your drop by + your thoughtfulness. Cheers Brian