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What does a child know of placidity? Little heart stirs, quickened by inbound ducks; pier is warm, feet soaking up excitement. Grownups pine to be stirred, awash with peace.
8/14/2020 Photo #1 Double Tetractys Poetry Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper Checked by howmanysyllables.com Syllables:10, 4, 3, 2, 1, 1, 2, 3, 4, 10

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Date: 8/15/2020 7:06:00 PM
This one is gorgeous, the art perfectly aligns also Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2020 4:54:00 AM
Thank you! I try to put myself in the character. Perhaps that is where my grandson gets the idea. ;)
Date: 8/14/2020 11:13:00 PM
Lovely, in every way...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2020 5:59:00 AM
Thank you, sweet poetess!
Date: 8/14/2020 12:45:00 PM
Oh, yes the child knows more of placidity than we know. We once knew! This is so lovely, Kim! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/14/2020 1:12:00 PM
Thank you, Janice :)
Date: 8/14/2020 11:57:00 AM
Absolutely great! You have surely nailed this one!! Here's to a winner in the contest, Kim! Joy and Light, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/14/2020 1:12:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon! Bless you!

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