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Pixie Poodle Goes Bump Bump

. At work time Pixie bump, bumps my leg, Always causing it to buckle, Grabs a pant leg till "mommy" says, "Food", which always brings us a chuckle! I come home and she's at the door, so slowly backing out of my sight, then she jumps out and barks real loud, so sure she will give me a fright! She bump, bumps on her toy basket, grabs one, then another instead, looking up with it, in her mouth, as if to say, "It's time for bed!" Then she'll look down at the floor. She is telling us, "I need to go!" A demand not, to be ignored, it's clear who is running the show! Settling snuggly between us, while we watch television, she drifts off to sleep and hogs the bed with a princess type precision. She fills our heart, and gives us ease, showing us a love, without facade. With something, so sweet in the world we're reassured, there is a God! 12/3/2018 For shape poetry poem contest by Eve Roper

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Date: 12/16/2018 12:51:00 PM
Totally delightful and very pretty. Congrats on your top win, Pat. Well done.
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Date: 12/17/2018 6:19:00 PM
Thank you Line. This little girl means a whole lot to us!! Have a good one!!!................patrick
Date: 12/16/2018 8:17:00 AM
Because, "dog" is "God" spelled backwards. Wonderful shape dedication to your four-legged friend.
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Date: 12/17/2018 6:18:00 PM
It is isn't it!.............Thank you so much M. L......pat
Date: 12/16/2018 6:25:00 AM
"...so sweet in the world we're reassured, there is a God!" Your piece has reminded me of God's assuring and assured presence. Thanks for sharing your talent. Congrats! God bless you.
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Date: 12/16/2018 7:34:00 AM
Thank you Beata!...........pat
Date: 12/15/2018 6:30:00 PM
way to go Pat! dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/16/2018 7:15:00 AM
Thanks Jan! It was unexpected but greatly appreciated! I really like the shape form, but it can be a hassle!...Have a great day!..............80)
Date: 12/15/2018 4:06:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great shape poem, Pat :) - I wish you a peaceful and beautiful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/15/2018 4:26:00 PM
To you as well Sunshine! Looks like we may a more mellow winter than expected, in Kentucky. (Hopefully) I was very pleased and surprised as well for the win. Still hard to believe. It was fun to make!.......pat
Date: 12/15/2018 3:02:00 PM
Gosh, I don't know how you do it. Excellent, Pat. Congratulations on your win in the shape contest! Sending wishes for holiday cheer, Carolyn
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Date: 12/15/2018 4:23:00 PM
Back at you Carolyn. I hope you and yours have a wonderful time over the holidays!.........80).....pat
Date: 12/15/2018 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win, Pat, I thank you for entering my contest, " Shapes". You brought to my mind the feeling of our pets brings to us. Stirring our hearts of how human they can be. Since my husband has passed my Yorkie fills my life with his needs. Your work had feeling of the love you have for him. You made the design flow and your drawing of word to me masterful. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 12/15/2018 4:22:00 PM
Wow! Thank you so much! I wasn't expecting that. I love music and poems with a message and also puzzles. The poems (a puzzle in themselves) come easier than the shapes, but I still enjoy it. Thank you again!...........pat
Date: 12/12/2018 7:58:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed this - the content is so warm and truly well-written which makes it even more of a joy to read, then, the shape - how creative you are! I've got nothing - shape, concrete and limerick poems pass my brain by. Sure this is a winner - contest or no. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 12/12/2018 3:06:00 PM
That you CayCay. (Interesting moniker!) My spell checker is not crazy about it though!....80)....I like to draw cartoons, but can't upload from my desktop so I thought I would try this. To me limericks are easier but I love puzzles so it's all good! Have a fantastic day! ......Patrick
Date: 12/4/2018 5:46:00 PM
wow Pat I am astounded by your shape poem - there is a contest you should eneter this gem!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/5/2018 3:25:00 PM
Thanks Jan. Well, I did enter it and added a note of doing that but it screwed up my picture, so I deleted that part. (Obviously, I'm unsure of what I'm doing!).......80)
Date: 12/4/2018 4:49:00 PM
Yes it is clear who's running the show, great silhouette of your dear doggy!
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Date: 12/5/2018 3:24:00 PM
Thanks Michelle. I had a really cute picture of Pixie (Well several actually) but poetry soup won't let me put anything from my desktop, so a drawing or "Paint" option was also out so I thought I'd try this. I have to say it is hard but an interesting puzzle of sorts!!..............pat

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