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Pivotal Point....Palindrome

Beating hearts lay beneath, where souls, dead, from love awaits. Armour as toughened emotions, chained and beaten. Yet, hope, holds quietness of mind. Waning torment and time. Eventually comes peace. Strength resolved. Pivotal. Resolved strength. Peace comes eventually, time and torment waning. Mind of quietness, holds hope yet. Beaten and chained emotions, toughened as amour, awaits love. From dead souls,where beneath, lay hearts beating.
Contest: Palindrome Host: Jared Pickett Placement: 3rd place

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Date: 7/21/2010 1:16:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your winning poem in Jared's contest with this wonderful Palindrome.. enjoy your top spot.. with luv..
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Date: 7/21/2010 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations Paula on your win in Jared Pickett's contest "The Palindrone". Love,Carol
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Date: 7/21/2010 4:16:00 AM
That's really good, some of the other palindromes feel a bit like lists, you've managed to get some 'proper' language into this one - well done
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Date: 7/20/2010 10:56:00 PM
Congratulations Paula, on your third place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/29/2010 9:04:00 AM
WOW, Paula I had to drop by a bit early to tell you that this is brilliant and very well written.... This is what I am looking for..... You read my example didn't you...... Good luck in my contest my friend.... I look forward to judging this contest already.....:JP}
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Date: 6/29/2010 7:37:00 AM
You tackled this palindrome with excellence!! I'm still having a hard time with this one....you make it look easy!! Great job, Paula! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 6/29/2010 4:08:00 AM
Excellent! I find these difficult to do. Good luck in the contese : )
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Date: 6/28/2010 10:21:00 PM
great job!! sounds like a winner!
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Date: 6/28/2010 9:56:00 PM
powerful wording. congrats
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Date: 6/28/2010 9:53:00 PM
Very good Paula.. good luck with this one in Jared's contest.. I just submitted Ignition... hope it charges Jared's battery.... haha with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii ..on vacation.. luv..
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