Pitter Patter

Pitter patter, drip, drop, it’s not an April shower
Drip, drop, drip, drop raining hour after long hour
Suddenly the sun streaks through, javelins of sunlight
Then back to pitter, patter, and rain throughout the night.

In and out of doorways, trying to stay dry
Thunder crashing the Queens dead, the country seems to sigh
Edward the happy monarch will rule with fun from now on
Rain, rain, it never stops crying for the Old Queen is gone.

The sun breaks through the London grey, it sparkles on a tree leaf
Drops still dripping slowly, displaying all their grief.
Happy times are coming, skipping down the London streets
Children playing hopscotch, while the bobbies are on the beat.

A blossom opens a leaf unfurls, breathes the rain drops in
The first sup of clean water in these london streets so grim.
Pitter, patter, feel the rain - dodging in and out of doorways
Trying to keep dry in the summer rain as one does always.

The ringing of the bells, Big Ben strikes the hour
A begging hand from a pile of rags huddled in the shower.
The old queen is dead and gone, but wanders through her city
Looking left and right, she shakes her head in certain pity

Through London town she wanders where dirt and grime abound
She’s searching for she does not know - until it she has found
The thunder crashes the rain pours then drips slowly to an end
The queen is dead long live the King she prays his ways he’ll mend.

©~GG~ 2012 
Entry for Tracie's Anything goes competition This is a Poem I have just done for a Magazine about when Queen Victoria died.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Guzzi Avatar
January 6, 2013 at 6:19 PM
I like this one alot. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
A   Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 9:54 PM
Mandy, congratulations on giving Tracie, "What she rEaLlY rEaLlY WaNt-ed"..lol... always~ PD.....
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 20, 2012 at 1:48 AM
Thanks Carol xx
Eastman Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 2:16 PM
Quite a facinating poem. Congratulations on the win!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 2:25 PM
Thanks Carol inspired by a piece of music.xx
Gasun Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 5:03 AM
Pitter patter is one of my favs. when i was young! Great write my dear friend Mandy! I love it! Congratulations on your super win! love/hugs, LG
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 2:24 PM
thanks Leonora love xx
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 5:19 PM
Excellent poetry, mandy. You are quite the craftswoman with your quill. This was a well deserved win and I'm glad I finally got to see this poem. Congrats.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 4:42 AM
Thanks Andy love, big compliment from you my friend xx
Sibanda Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 12:54 PM
Congratulations on your great win. The poem is musically compelling.
Sibanda Avatar
December 20, 2012 at 9:02 AM
You are welcome. Yes. l guess l have an ear for music!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 19, 2012 at 4:43 AM
Thank you. Ndaba, I am so glad you picked up on that it was inspired by a piece of music.xx
Williams Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 11:23 AM
Mandy a big congrats on your super win, even if I am soaking wet...David
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 11:52 AM
Thanks David xx
Ober Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 7:35 AM
This is a fabulous write! Congrats on an awesome win! :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 11:52 AM
Thanks Heather love xx
May Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 6:16 AM
congrats on your first place finish Mandy
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 11:53 AM
thanks Joseph xx
Roberts Avatar
December 17, 2012 at 11:27 PM
Wow Mandy this is great, well done ..Seren
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December 18, 2012 at 1:30 AM
Thanks Sass xx
Veetil Avatar
December 17, 2012 at 11:02 PM
Amazing work. Congratulations on your win. Love, Mehnaz
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 1:30 AM
Thanks Mehnaz xx
Horsman Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 9:06 AM
this is amazing, love the subject matter, and the story line, which is as usually top quality Mandy, i enjoyed this...
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 9:46 AM
As usual, thanks harry xx
Cavanaugh Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 10:24 PM
Wow, Great poem Mandy.
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December 13, 2012 at 6:45 AM
Thanks Jon xx
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December 12, 2012 at 6:19 AM
Fantabulous poem...congratulation for your great work GG ..like it much !!!! <3<3<3 SK
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December 12, 2012 at 7:10 AM
Thanks Love xx
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