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Pitter Patter

Pitter patter, drip, drop, it’s not an April shower Drip, drop, drip, drop raining hour after long hour Suddenly the sun streaks through, javelins of sunlight Then back to pitter, patter, and rain throughout the night. In and out of doorways, trying to stay dry Thunder crashing the Queens dead, the country seems to sigh Edward the happy monarch will rule with fun from now on Rain, rain, it never stops crying for the Old Queen is gone. The sun breaks through the London grey, it sparkles on a tree leaf Drops still dripping slowly, displaying all their grief. Happy times are coming, skipping down the London streets Children playing hopscotch, while the bobbies are on the beat. A blossom opens a leaf unfurls, breathes the rain drops in The first sup of clean water in these london streets so grim. Pitter, patter, feel the rain - dodging in and out of doorways Trying to keep dry in the summer rain as one does always. The ringing of the bells, Big Ben strikes the hour A begging hand from a pile of rags huddled in the shower. The old queen is dead and gone, but wanders through her city Looking left and right, she shakes her head in certain pity Through London town she wanders where dirt and grime abound She’s searching for she does not know - until it she has found The thunder crashes the rain pours then drips slowly to an end The queen is dead long live the King she prays his ways he’ll mend. ©~GG~ 2012 Entry for Tracie's Anything goes competition This is a Poem I have just done for a Magazine about when Queen Victoria died.

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Date: 1/6/2013 6:19:00 PM
I like this one alot. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/19/2012 9:54:00 PM
Mandy, congratulations on giving Tracie, "What she rEaLlY rEaLlY WaNt-ed"..lol... always~ PD.....
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/20/2012 1:48:00 AM
Thanks Carol xx
Date: 12/19/2012 2:16:00 PM
Quite a facinating poem. Congratulations on the win!
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Date: 12/19/2012 2:25:00 PM
Thanks Carol inspired by a piece of music.xx
Date: 12/19/2012 5:03:00 AM
Pitter patter is one of my favs. when i was young! Great write my dear friend Mandy! I love it! Congratulations on your super win! love/hugs, LG
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Date: 12/19/2012 2:24:00 PM
thanks Leonora love xx
Date: 12/18/2012 5:19:00 PM
Excellent poetry, mandy. You are quite the craftswoman with your quill. This was a well deserved win and I'm glad I finally got to see this poem. Congrats.
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Date: 12/19/2012 4:42:00 AM
Thanks Andy love, big compliment from you my friend xx
Date: 12/18/2012 12:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win. The poem is musically compelling.
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Date: 12/20/2012 9:02:00 AM
You are welcome. Yes. l guess l have an ear for music!
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Date: 12/19/2012 4:43:00 AM
Thank you. Ndaba, I am so glad you picked up on that it was inspired by a piece of music.xx
Date: 12/18/2012 11:23:00 AM
Mandy a big congrats on your super win, even if I am soaking wet...David
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Date: 12/18/2012 11:52:00 AM
Thanks David xx
Date: 12/18/2012 7:35:00 AM
This is a fabulous write! Congrats on an awesome win! :)
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Date: 12/18/2012 11:52:00 AM
Thanks Heather love xx
Date: 12/18/2012 6:16:00 AM
congrats on your first place finish Mandy
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Date: 12/18/2012 11:53:00 AM
thanks Joseph xx
Date: 12/17/2012 11:27:00 PM
Wow Mandy this is great, well done ..Seren
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Date: 12/18/2012 1:30:00 AM
Thanks Sass xx
Date: 12/17/2012 11:02:00 PM
Amazing work. Congratulations on your win. Love, Mehnaz
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Date: 12/18/2012 1:30:00 AM
Thanks Mehnaz xx
Date: 12/13/2012 9:06:00 AM
this is amazing, love the subject matter, and the story line, which is as usually top quality Mandy, i enjoyed this...
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Date: 12/13/2012 9:46:00 AM
As usual, thanks harry xx
Date: 12/12/2012 10:24:00 PM
Wow, Great poem Mandy.
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Date: 12/13/2012 6:45:00 AM
Thanks Jon xx
Date: 12/12/2012 6:19:00 AM
Fantabulous poem...congratulation for your great work GG ..like it much !!!! <3<3<3 SK
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Date: 12/12/2012 7:10:00 AM
Thanks Love xx

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