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Pitch black

Pitch black An overcast of darkness It’s a misery Its all I see Do u see what I see? The little girl crooked her head to look around the room Is it the sky? Why its nothing like That my child Come See the world from my eyes The old woman raises her hand to touch The girls face Why are you so cold My child I see the sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/23/2016 3:36:00 PM
an emotional write that catch's the imagination. Fullmoon Sway welcome to soup. Keep writing you show promise hugs a 7 from me
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Date: 1/26/2016 7:22:00 AM
*hugs back* thank you very much :)
Date: 1/22/2016 11:13:00 AM
how can improve this poem
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