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Pit Stop -- Anger Contest

Bursting for a bathroom;
Tim Horton’s stop
~ closed for cleaning


For Susan Burch’s contest
“Show Me The Anger”
Won 2nd place

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Skat A

October 19, 2012 at 7:42 PM

Hi Miss Lee, how I feel the anger. COngrats with your 2nd place win. *smail seeya SIDDY

Sara Kendrick

August 8, 2012 at 2:03 PM

Yes, that could be an anger moment..Thanks for the stop by my blog..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

December 25, 2011 at 11:01 PM

Lee,, a nice haiku, thank you for sharing.. May the magic of writing fill your days here on the soup. May all your dreams come true this holiday season. I hope you are enjoying the blessings that Christmas brings.. filling our hearts with hope and joy, just take care of yourself... once again enjoyed your poem,,always,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 3, 2011 at 7:33 AM

Congratulations on your win in the "Show Me The Anger" contest Lee. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

October 2, 2011 at 9:42 PM

Good luck in the contest LEE,,, have a good one,..p.d.

Lori Lucas Mcclure

October 2, 2011 at 8:59 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!!====Lori

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 2, 2011 at 6:52 PM

Congrats Lee on second place win with this excellent expression of emotion luv...

Phyllis Babcock

October 2, 2011 at 3:23 PM

This is so funny because we all have this happen. So sorry to hear you are sick - hope you are improving. Lots of flu and colds here at the moment. God Bless phyl

Michael J. Falotico

October 2, 2011 at 10:02 AM

LOL, so true!!!! Never open when you ned them....always Michael

James Fraser

October 2, 2011 at 9:14 AM

Oh my! nothing worse than wanting to go, with no place to go to. Good luck in the contest Lee. Have a lovely Sunday :)

Andrea Dietrich

October 2, 2011 at 1:28 AM

It was just a symbol, Lee. (and it was Cleopatra's Nile,not the one we know today!) hahaha. Now let's see this this haiku here. HEy, this is really cute. You were so inventive to do it in a short form like this. You should name it a senryu for being about human nature. this kind of thing makes me angry too, AND I mean pissed (heehehe)

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