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Pirouetting Prussian Flakes

Nestled with the glittering elements, I ponder the immortality of the senses— my lucidity twirls, as pirouetting flakes through sapphire mist amidst cyanic windstorms, drifting like arctic embers, towards cerulean twilight skies, beyond frost covered pains, littered across glacial clouds that linger, swirling upon an indigo iced cluster of topaz teal stars, enveloping my cobalt soul beneath your cashmere caress— we behold the wonder of an opulent crescent moon, cradling our kismet love, in vows of our balsamic destiny, ever sanctioning icebound purgatories buried deep in our bones, in flurry feathered snowfields, guiding our souls back home to our halcyon hereafters, where I’ll sit throned as the queen of blizzards, wearing a crown of bleeding splinters.

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Bill Baker

Date: 10/10/2023 8:59:00 PM

My first visit to your poetry, Fading Star Silence ... what a treat. The words flow so smoothly, and the imagery is exquisite. Congratulations on your placement in Silent Ones contest. Welcome to Poetry Soup, we can use more poet like yourself. I'll be following your poetry. Sweet title by the way. A poet in Texas, Bill

Paige Hind

Date: 10/10/2023 5:28:00 PM

Wow! That was an amazing read!

Nik Canada7

Date: 10/10/2023 5:12:00 AM

amore i'm proud and happy for you, your seep breathtaking words show me your depth in your rare beautiful souland gols heart,my blue rose.You are a paintress with the palette of your seraphic majestic aura painting your sapphire emotion with bright colors and shades of grace and elegance,my Korean princess,creating a,masterpiece of pureness and beauty.You are my poetry in my heart for eternity,mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito sempre amore mio i love you deeply micia.il nostro eterno amore

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/10/2023 2:45:00 PM

Ahh..my sweet baby! Thank you so much always, my beautiful soul for your loving words of encouragement and support and love! You always lift me up, making my heart and soul soar! So in love with you, deeper and deeper! Ti amo amore mio mio bellissimo martio to the moon and everywhere per sempre..tua noi Infinito, il nostro Eterno amore Mia passione

Silent One

Date: 10/9/2023 1:03:00 PM

You have a magical way with words and this one has been expressed so delicately.. Thank you for writing and congratulations on your placement..

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/10/2023 2:43:00 PM

Wow! Thank you so much, silent one! Truly unexpected to place..thank you! It’s always an honor to be placed by you whether here or there! And your thoughts and feedback always so looked forward to by me! Thank you thank you, amazing poet!!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/5/2023 11:57:00 PM

My beautiful soul sis, i am always in awe, captivated by your poetic skills! I love how you’ve written for Silent ones contest, in sheer eloquence!the way you’ve used winter wordplay and also how you’ve used colors is beyond brilliant and so profound! Your way with writing always leaves me in awe! I especially love the opening and also “ where I’ll sit throned as the queen of blizzards, wearing a crown of bleeding splinters.“ wow!!!Queen of blizzards! Soul hitting! A fave this is for me!

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/7/2023 1:38:00 PM

Ahhh..my beautiful soul sis..your words and thoughts on my pieces truly is an honor coming from such a brilliant poetess such as yourself..so selflessly devoted and caring you are..your beautiful heart never goes unnoticed by me and the ones who truly know you..ahh..and so honored part of your breathtaking mind and soul has left it’s mark, engraving itself so flawlessly here..always grateful to you! So love how we can talk about anything and everything, my soul sis! Thank you so much for your truly poetically divine thoughts here! <3

Nik Canada7

Date: 10/4/2023 1:28:00 AM

i love this so much amore?your deep heartfelt words nake me feel your deeo pure love within your,rare beautiful soul and gold heart,my blue rose.The grace and elegance of sapphire deepest emotions create a masterpiece of intense shivers of devotion, my korean princess.You leave me breathless loving each part of you like a rare blue gem,my marvelous creature.Mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito per sempre amoremio ??? i love you deeply micia..mia passione per sempre..tuo..il nostro eterno amore

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/7/2023 1:40:00 PM

Ahhh..my love..your words truly imprint upon my heart and soul..your beautiful support always, your sweet and precious encouragement you always show me..the patience and beauty you exude..so deeply in love with you..if possible more and more each day! Reaching unfathomable heights..you are my everything, ti amo amore mio mio bellissimo martio per sempre to the moon and everywhere..tua noi Infinito, Mia passione il nostro Eterno amore <3