Pirouettes

Thou morning sun, ye stars and orb of night,
ye daunting winds inducing clouds to roll
proclaim thy Maker’s beauty, grace, and might;
thy pirouettes declare His firm control.

creationmoonstarssunrhyme

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2020 12:06:00 PM

Awesome, JOhn. I am so glad to see you on the winner list! Congratulations.

John Watt
Date: 4/18/2020 12:20:00 PM

Ditto to you, my sunset-loving poetess friend. Thanks for stopping by again!

Frederic Parker

Date: 4/18/2020 11:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win filled with hope and grace

John Watt
Date: 4/18/2020 12:19:00 PM

Grateful for your kind words Frederic. Well done on your #1 finish!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/18/2020 11:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I love your line, "proclaim thy Maker’s beauty, grace, and might." His beauty is everywhere, grace is on us and might we need. Have a wonderful weekend.........

John Watt
Date: 4/18/2020 11:18:00 AM

Paula, thank you for your kind words and congratulations. You have a wonderful weekend too!

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 4/18/2020 8:33:00 AM

Great write, Bud - congratulations on your well-deserved 8th place in the Rithimus Divisa Poetry Contest, John - this was a VERY close contest, with so many wonderful writes - blessings! :o)

John Watt
Date: 4/18/2020 8:50:00 AM

Thanks Greg, I've been looking over your winners and you did a great job judging. Honored to be among your top 10! Have a great day, my friend.

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/11/2020 7:00:00 PM

Love the graceful melody this poem exudes, John.

John Watt
Date: 3/11/2020 7:38:00 PM

Thank you kindly, Line. See my Soupmail.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2020 5:32:00 PM

I love the contrast in that last line: soft pirouttes vs. his firm control. Great entry from you, my friend.

John Watt
Date: 3/11/2020 7:38:00 PM

Thank you very much, Andrea. I know you have been inspired by many a sunset!

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/10/2020 2:09:00 PM

Gorgeous imagery and a fine stanza from your pen, John! Enjoyed this! :)

John Watt
Date: 3/11/2020 2:17:00 PM

I so appreciate your dropping by Laura, especially since you are one of my favorite wordsmiths of nature. Can you tell I borrowed some wording from the hymnal? Have a wonderful day, my friend ~ John