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Pirouettes

Thou morning sun, ye stars and orb of night, ye daunting winds inducing clouds to roll proclaim thy Maker’s beauty, grace, and might; thy pirouettes declare His firm control.

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Date: 4/18/2020 12:06:00 PM
Awesome, JOhn. I am so glad to see you on the winner list! Congratulations.
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John Watt
Date: 4/18/2020 12:20:00 PM
Ditto to you, my sunset-loving poetess friend. Thanks for stopping by again!
Date: 4/18/2020 11:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win filled with hope and grace
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Date: 4/18/2020 12:19:00 PM
Grateful for your kind words Frederic. Well done on your #1 finish!
Date: 4/18/2020 11:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love your line, "proclaim thy Maker’s beauty, grace, and might." His beauty is everywhere, grace is on us and might we need. Have a wonderful weekend.........
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John Watt
Date: 4/18/2020 11:18:00 AM
Paula, thank you for your kind words and congratulations. You have a wonderful weekend too!
Date: 4/18/2020 8:33:00 AM
Great write, Bud - congratulations on your well-deserved 8th place in the Rithimus Divisa Poetry Contest, John - this was a VERY close contest, with so many wonderful writes - blessings! :o)
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John Watt
Date: 4/18/2020 8:50:00 AM
Thanks Greg, I've been looking over your winners and you did a great job judging. Honored to be among your top 10! Have a great day, my friend.
Date: 3/11/2020 7:00:00 PM
Love the graceful melody this poem exudes, John.
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John Watt
Date: 3/11/2020 7:38:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Line. See my Soupmail.
Date: 3/11/2020 5:32:00 PM
I love the contrast in that last line: soft pirouttes vs. his firm control. Great entry from you, my friend.
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John Watt
Date: 3/11/2020 7:38:00 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea. I know you have been inspired by many a sunset!
Date: 3/10/2020 2:09:00 PM
Gorgeous imagery and a fine stanza from your pen, John! Enjoyed this! :)
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Date: 3/11/2020 2:17:00 PM
I so appreciate your dropping by Laura, especially since you are one of my favorite wordsmiths of nature. Can you tell I borrowed some wording from the hymnal? Have a wonderful day, my friend ~ John
Date: 3/9/2020 4:19:00 PM
Nice piece John, hope you are a winner! Have a great day, Gordon
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John Watt
Date: 3/11/2020 2:15:00 PM
Thank you, dear Gordon for your ongoing encouragement. Have a wonderful day, my friend ~ John
Date: 3/9/2020 11:28:00 AM
John, I love this, your words are perfection, how can it not be a winner _Constance
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John Watt
Date: 3/9/2020 11:56:00 AM
Sincere gratitude for your kind words, Constance.
Date: 3/8/2020 11:48:00 AM
Beautifully evocative of the glorious sky, like a lush oil painting - wishing you good luck in the contest, John!
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Date: 3/8/2020 11:05:00 PM
Thank you for your kind, poetic words, Michelle
Date: 3/7/2020 7:07:00 PM
Charming poem, John.
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John Watt
Date: 3/7/2020 8:09:00 PM
Thank you dear Line