Pirate of My Heart

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It was the 17th century, and I was travelling with my family,
            We were sailing to Europe and a new beginning;
Father had brought all our money and belongings on the ship,
      Everything we owned was in the hull in chests tied down.

It was dawn when the Pirates came out of the fog,
            The battle was short, and I am not sure how many died;
I was so afraid as I clung to father, shivering on the cold deck,
      There was enormous booty taken from the ships hull.

When the Pirates finished, we were looked over critically,
              I had heard tales of these rogues taking girls as slaves;
The captain touched my raven hair with his long fingers,
      I could not look at him but I sensed his mighty strength.

He grabbed my arm and dragged me away screaming,
            That was the last I saw of my family; I was a captive;
His ship was massive and the jolly roger flag fluttered,
      I looked back as my boat faded on the distance waves.

I was sure that all my family was dead and I wept and wept,
            The Pirate captain put me in a cabin and locked the door;
Days turned into weeks and weeks and still he did not come,
      Then one night as I combed my hair; there he was.

In two long strides, he had me in his arms of steel,
             And I was swept away with his passionate kiss;
I could not believe that I, a virgin, was in the Pirates arms,
      Fighting was useless, and why try, this was my future.

So, I melted quietly into his embrace and I was his,
             I let him seduce me with his body and his words;
Pleasure was flowing through my young eager body in waves,
       And I knew that I was truly a prisoner of this man.

In the days and nights that passed, I loved him,
            I was his slave, but he soon became mine as well;
He whispered in my ears, promises of treasures and gowns,
     And in time, I grew to love this Pirate of my heart.

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September 3, 2015

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Submitted to the contest, 101 In A Row - 8
Sponsor,  PD

Third Place 
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Written for the contest, A Pirate's Life For Me,
Sponsor, Kelly Deschler

First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 8/1/2016 10:58:00 AM
Congrats on your win my friend. Hugs, Cloudy Poet
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Date: 7/31/2016 4:18:00 PM
Wel done! I think I want to be a pirate :-)
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Date: 7/30/2016 8:42:00 PM
Broke,, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest --- 101 in a row. :) Stop by my blog "They Hang Horses, Don't They?" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 10/6/2015 2:42:00 PM
,"Congratulations on your win!!"A great poem with t' Golden pen! Private life t' be"
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Date: 10/5/2015 2:27:00 PM
Great poem and story, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your well-deserved 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/5/2015 8:38:00 AM
Great story BW. Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 10/5/2015 12:08:00 AM
Well woven tale, BW, congrats! Viv x
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Date: 10/4/2015 9:11:00 PM
Ye do tell the tale o' the capn's and 'ow they always be choosin' first! Won'erful write 'n congrats on yer win!
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Date: 10/4/2015 7:33:00 PM
BW, congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/4/2015 6:55:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your Pirate's Life Win.... Forever **SKAT**
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Date: 10/4/2015 1:49:00 PM
Nice write, congrats on the first place.
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Date: 10/4/2015 1:19:00 PM
what a wonderful story! congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/4/2015 12:09:00 PM
An excellent poem! Great romantic storytelling in this one. Really enjoyed it... Congrats on a first place win!
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Date: 9/4/2015 2:22:00 PM
Sounds like the beginning of a romance novel. Good luck.
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Date: 9/4/2015 1:20:00 PM
Great write. Left me wanting more.
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Date: 9/4/2015 6:07:00 AM
Very creative. Thought provoking. Very nice Broken Wings.
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Date: 9/4/2015 3:15:00 AM
Broken Wings, you surely know how to weave a good story!!!! hope to see it high!! a winner for me!~Olive ELoisa =')
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Date: 9/4/2015 2:36:00 AM
G'day Broken Wings... sort of reminds me of the old pirate movies when the dashing captain won the beautiful lady's heart - enjoyed and good luck - Lindsay
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Date: 9/3/2015 10:35:00 PM
Great narrative broken! Worth beyond a seven! Sure will place high! Best wishes!
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Date: 9/3/2015 6:54:00 PM
An awesome tale, Broken Wings.. I really liked the line " I was his slave, but he soon became mine as well"... this was well thought out, and very entertaining to read. A well-deserved 7! Always, Laura
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Date: 9/3/2015 6:34:00 PM
Darn it, there is no page to turn - I want more. Thank you for writing an awesome fantasy ... CayCay
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