Peter Dome Poet Free verse

Piranhas Shopping Frenzy

Shoals of frenzied greedy piranhas
still hungry after the lavish feast
Eyes awide on mass they stream
and crowd the streets.

Some have camped out all night
until the morning light
and the temple doors of worship
open wide
and people rush inside.

Buying anything in site
pushing and shoving
grabbing snatching
ending up in a fight
Buying things they don't even need. 

So is the season of shopping and greed.

'Wonder what Jesus would think'?.



Peter Dome.copyright.2013.Dec.

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Shadow Hamilton December 26, 2013 at 8:32 AM much the same as he did in the temple Peter. Well though out good pen Shadow x smile hug Peter Dome December 26, 2013 at 11:35 AM Hi Shadow thank you so much. yes very much as in the temple, We have gambling and the buying of gold in the local church. Anything goes these days..take care. best wishes. Pete. X.