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*Image of Quality Rating by Pixabay. Pipe Dream Down The Avenue Sun host wishes as roses fling in zephyrs of a florist edge ... girls prefer them in a bouquet Candy store chocolates in their pre-melt state, mixes of boxes, bows ... gift sweets girls relish Large windowfront with pieces of jewelry, rings, trinkets, and other blings ... an all-girls fantasy At home, a plucked rose withers, half ate candy bar melts, on his cell wishing his girlfriend like his newly bought shiny watch from ... down the avenue 2021 August 27 *1st Place* A BRIAN STRAND 1094 ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 March 23 *HM* The Avenue ~~Julia Ward: Judged 2021 September 25

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/23/2022 1:35:00 AM

A mystery-mingled work. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/23/2022 2:35:00 AM

In the end, Christuraj, reality takes a bite out of life my friend, Aloha~William

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/26/2021 7:59:00 AM

Chocolates and roses, who needs a watch, I will take them any day my dear, walk down the avenue of sensual thought, and leave behind the parking lot, lovely thoughts penned, congrats on your win dear William :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/26/2021 9:23:00 AM

I appreciate your wondrous expressions, Vienna, sweets, and scented wins out the day, have a blessed day! Peace and joy my friend, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/25/2021 10:11:00 AM

William, congratulations on your win. Your picture of the avenue is bright and fresh with stores that make our mouths water and our hearts beat a little faster in anticipation. Then, reality sets in! So well done. Aloha my friend! Blessings!

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/25/2021 11:30:00 AM

A hearty thanks, Sam, I thought to answer my comments firstly -- this was unexpected? Humor befitted me prior to the writ, as being the best option, I'm glad that I chose well! Meaningfully, welcomed expressions, my friend! Own the joy that is yours, Aloha!

Beata Agustin

Date: 9/25/2021 7:01:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/25/2021 11:16:00 AM

Glad-filled tidings welcomed, Beata! Peace and joy my friend, Aloha!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/25/2021 5:42:00 AM

Great Writing! Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/25/2021 11:14:00 AM

Thank you, Christuraj, blessings, Aloha!

Julia Ward

Date: 9/25/2021 3:53:00 AM

Well done for your fantasy write, doing well in my contest, William. Julia