William Kelii Kekaula Poet Free verse

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Pipe Dream Down the Avenue

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Pipe Dream Down The Avenue
Sun host wishes as roses fling in zephyrs of a
florist edge ... girls prefer them in a bouquet


Candy store chocolates in their pre-melt state, 
mixes of boxes, bows ... gift sweets girls relish


Large windowfront with pieces of jewelry, rings, 
trinkets, and other blings ... an all-girls fantasy


At home, a plucked rose withers, half ate candy 
bar melts, on his cell wishing his girlfriend like 
his newly bought shiny watch from ...
down the avenue

2021 August 27
*1st Place*
A BRIAN STRAND 1094
~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 March 23
*HM*
The Avenue
~~Julia Ward: Judged 2021 September 25

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Christuraj Alex March 23, 2022 at 1:35 AM A mystery-mingled work. Beautifully written. Congratulations! William Kelii Kekaula March 23, 2022 at 2:35 AM In the end, Christuraj, reality takes a bite out of life my friend, Aloha~William

Mystic Rose Rose September 26, 2021 at 7:59 AM Chocolates and roses, who needs a watch, I will take them any day my dear, walk down the avenue of sensual thought, and leave behind the parking lot, lovely thoughts penned, congrats on your win dear William :) William Kelii Kekaula September 26, 2021 at 9:23 AM I appreciate your wondrous expressions, Vienna, sweets, and scented wins out the day, have a blessed day! Peace and joy my friend, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman September 25, 2021 at 10:11 AM William, congratulations on your win. Your picture of the avenue is bright and fresh with stores that make our mouths water and our hearts beat a little faster in anticipation. Then, reality sets in! So well done. Aloha my friend! Blessings! William Kelii Kekaula September 25, 2021 at 11:30 AM A hearty thanks, Sam, I thought to answer my comments firstly -- this was unexpected? Humor befitted me prior to the writ, as being the best option, I'm glad that I chose well! Meaningfully, welcomed expressions, my friend! Own the joy that is yours, Aloha!

Beata Agustin September 25, 2021 at 7:01 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you. William Kelii Kekaula September 25, 2021 at 11:16 AM Glad-filled tidings welcomed, Beata! Peace and joy my friend, Aloha!

Christuraj Alex September 25, 2021 at 5:42 AM Great Writing! Congratulations! William Kelii Kekaula September 25, 2021 at 11:14 AM Thank you, Christuraj, blessings, Aloha!

Julia Ward September 25, 2021 at 3:53 AM Well done for your fantasy write, doing well in my contest, William. Julia