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Pinnacle

I
Started
Up the path,
Not knowing what
I would find up there.
Passing the foothills, then
Stopping to catch my breath,
I gazed upon the mountain itself:
Barren, rugged wind-swept granite.
The pinnacle was somewhere beyond,
Hidden by a crown of feathery rain-clouds.
The path weaved back and forth, mostly climbing,
Occasionally entering fissures, once passing by a cave.
The higher I climbed, the less worn became the pathway,
Eventually looking like something only a mountain goat would climb.
Passing through the clouds, I could seldom anymore see what was below.
It got colder. I struggled to catch my breath; I could see I was near the summit.
I didn’t have a flag to plant, so I just sat on a rock, listened to the wind and my heartbeat.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/11/2014 4:21:00 PM
Congrad's on your win, Light & Love
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Date: 10/11/2014 11:40:00 AM
wonderful shape poem many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/11/2014 10:32:00 AM
Great shape, great poem. Congratulations on your win Mark.
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Date: 9/28/2014 6:45:00 PM
Perfect shape poem entry for the contest Mark. I used to love climbing till my knees gave out. My kids carry on for me now. My son is a real dare devil and fearless. I get worried about him. Great entry for the contest!
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Date: 9/16/2014 3:00:00 PM
so beautifully scribed with an ending that depicts the height of an experience coming from the soul... a delight to read you, mark
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 9/17/2014 9:34:00 AM
Thanks Nette. Always enjoy reading your comments.
Date: 9/16/2014 10:07:00 AM
Well penned and crafted concrete, good luck, Mark
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 9/17/2014 9:35:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Mehta. Always enjoy reading you too.
Date: 9/16/2014 7:29:00 AM
Wow, I am impressed. I applaud your talent, well done :)
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 9/17/2014 9:35:00 AM
Thanks Casarah. Always enjoy reading your comments too.

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