Pink Lips

For COLOUR Contest by Tammy Reams PINK lips KISSABLE pillows of comforting texture with RED devil allure WHISPERING words of love from your SILVERY tongue The AROMA of romance paints the room with PURPLE hues SWEET caresses so passionate, turns my heart GOLDEN The WARMNESS of your embrace intensifies the bright ORANGE fire burning in my soul PINK lips Your PINK KISSABLE lips My blood RED heart beats WHISPERING to my hips Your SILVERY tongue meets With mine as teeth nip Your AROMA drives me Into a PURPLE haze So SWEET I’m on my knees GOLDEN stars I gaze WARMNESS I do see Your heart an ORANGE blaze PASSION

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Paul Callus

Date: 7/14/2016 12:18:00 PM

Hi Laura! Came back to reread this passionate poem...one of your best! ~ Still looking out for new posts:) ~ Warm regards // paul

Laura Hay
Date: 7/15/2016 4:04:00 AM

Thank you again Paul! Trying to get my flow going for more soon (hopefully), warm regards, Laura.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/12/2015 7:28:00 AM

Congratulations! I enjoyed reading this one.

Laura Hay
Date: 11/12/2015 1:44:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comments :)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 11/11/2015 4:01:00 PM

Congratulations

Laura Hay
Date: 11/12/2015 1:44:00 PM

Thank you!

Skat A

Date: 11/11/2015 10:54:00 AM

nice

Laura Hay
Date: 11/12/2015 1:43:00 PM

Thank you! :)

Tammy Reams

Date: 11/11/2015 8:48:00 AM

Congrats on your win Laura! Thank you for entering into my contest.

Laura Hay
Date: 11/12/2015 1:43:00 PM

Thanks for the HM Tammy! Glad you liked it. I enjoyed the challenge of your contest. Warm Regards, Laura.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2015 3:35:00 PM

gosh, this is so good! I don't quite get the directions for this one at the contest page so I hope you did it right. It sure seems like you put a lot of work into it and you ended up with a beautiful poem

Laura Hay
Date: 11/5/2015 3:40:00 PM

Thanks for your kind comments Andrea, I wasn't sure if it required the word pink at the start of each line as many of the other contestants have done but even if not I'm happy that my poem has meaning for me and enjoyed the challenge and inspiration it provided, warm regards, Laura

Skat A

Date: 11/5/2015 1:37:00 PM

Laura, wow with passion on every line. Seems as if he has the best of you. Love SKAT

Laura Hay
Date: 11/5/2015 1:59:00 PM

My husband and I have been together 25 years now and still passionate for each other ;) warm regards, Laura

Emile Pinet

Date: 11/5/2015 11:55:00 AM

Your poem falls within the category of whimsical, fanciful and imaginative; armed with an energy of its own that propels it into our sphere of reality. Emile.

Laura Hay
Date: 11/5/2015 1:30:00 PM

Really value your positive feedback Emile! Thank you, warm regards, Laura

Paul Callus

Date: 10/16/2015 11:22:00 AM

Hi Laura! I allot you top marks for this poem where colour drips from each and every line. Those pink lips lead to desire and blazing passion. gl in the contest. ~ Warm regards // paul

Laura Hay
Date: 10/16/2015 2:01:00 PM

Thank you so much Paul! Warm Regards,Laura. :)