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Pink Lips

For COLOUR Contest by Tammy Reams

PINK lips
KISSABLE pillows of comforting texture with RED devil allure
WHISPERING words of love from your SILVERY tongue
The AROMA of romance paints the room with PURPLE hues
SWEET caresses so passionate, turns my heart GOLDEN
The WARMNESS of your embrace intensifies the bright ORANGE fire burning in my soul

PINK lips
Your PINK KISSABLE lips
My blood RED heart beats
WHISPERING to my hips
Your SILVERY tongue meets
With mine as teeth nip

Your AROMA drives me
Into a PURPLE haze
So SWEET I’m on my knees
GOLDEN stars I gaze
WARMNESS I do see
Your heart an ORANGE blaze
PASSION

Copyright © Laura Hay | Year Posted 2015

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Paul Callus Date: 7/14/2016 12:18:00 PM Hi Laura! Came back to reread this passionate poem...one of your best! ~ Still looking out for new posts:) ~ Warm regards // paul Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 7/15/2016 4:04:00 AM Thank you again Paul! Trying to get my flow going for more soon (hopefully), warm regards, Laura.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/12/2015 7:28:00 AM Congratulations! I enjoyed reading this one. Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 11/12/2015 1:44:00 PM Thank you for your kind comments :)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 11/11/2015 4:01:00 PM Congratulations Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 11/12/2015 1:44:00 PM Thank you!

Skat A Date: 11/11/2015 10:54:00 AM nice Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 11/12/2015 1:43:00 PM Thank you! :)

Tammy Reams Date: 11/11/2015 8:48:00 AM Congrats on your win Laura! Thank you for entering into my contest. Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 11/12/2015 1:43:00 PM Thanks for the HM Tammy! Glad you liked it. I enjoyed the challenge of your contest. Warm Regards, Laura.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/5/2015 3:35:00 PM gosh, this is so good! I don't quite get the directions for this one at the contest page so I hope you did it right. It sure seems like you put a lot of work into it and you ended up with a beautiful poem Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 11/5/2015 3:40:00 PM Thanks for your kind comments Andrea, I wasn't sure if it required the word pink at the start of each line as many of the other contestants have done but even if not I'm happy that my poem has meaning for me and enjoyed the challenge and inspiration it provided, warm regards, Laura

Skat A Date: 11/5/2015 1:37:00 PM Laura, wow with passion on every line. Seems as if he has the best of you. Love SKAT Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 11/5/2015 1:59:00 PM My husband and I have been together 25 years now and still passionate for each other ;) warm regards, Laura

Emile Pinet Date: 11/5/2015 11:55:00 AM Your poem falls within the category of whimsical, fanciful and imaginative; armed with an energy of its own that propels it into our sphere of reality. Emile. Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 11/5/2015 1:30:00 PM Really value your positive feedback Emile! Thank you, warm regards, Laura

Paul Callus Date: 10/16/2015 11:22:00 AM Hi Laura! I allot you top marks for this poem where colour drips from each and every line. Those pink lips lead to desire and blazing passion. gl in the contest. ~ Warm regards // paul Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 10/16/2015 2:01:00 PM Thank you so much Paul! Warm Regards,Laura. :)