Pine-Ing To Gossip

Hush, can you hear? 
So soft and yet so clear,
are the whispers of the forest.
You may think it is the breeze, 
but listen closely and you'll see, 
the wind's as absent as can be. 
Indeed it is the whispers, 
the sly whispers of the trees.

I hear them when I'm on my own,
entranced beside the moonlit lake.
They wonder why I'm sad, so sad, 
and try to cheer my solemn soul, 
with jokes and laughs and Billy Joel.
Such company can be a treat, 
so when my heart does allow, 
I whisper back, the trees and I. 

I sometimes act as their spy, 
in places where the trees are few. 
I whisper to the trees alone, 
all dank and limp beside the road. 
The one thing I never knew, 
was how they loved to gossip so. 
For as a present of our friendship, 
I bought the latest mags and comics.

Now lie, I do, beside the pines, 
reciting the celebrity times.

Date: 06.11.2020
Contest: Whisper to Me Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Regina Riddle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mishra Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 3:44 AM
A lyrical touch to this poem blended with nature's soothing touch of love Charlotte. Congratulations on your win :)
Watkins Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 6:58 AM
I am glad you enjoyed it, through this rather strange period of lockdown life I feel many of us have become more in tune again of the marvelous mature that surrounds us.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 6:52 PM
To be in tune with the trees is a real gift. I enjoyed this beautiful poem and I love your humorous ending Charlotte. Congratulations on your deserving win! Blessings xxoo
Watkins Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 6:57 AM
Thanks Connie, I sometimes believe we can express our thoughts more easily through poetry or through other mediums than through simply speaking. All the best and stay safe, Charlotte
Mcintosh Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 5:44 PM
Your poem is delightful and I'm delighted to congratulate you on your placement in the Whispers contest I sponsored. May you continue to write such exquisite verses!!! Many blessings and love sent your way, Gina
Watkins Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 6:55 AM
Thank you so much for your many kind words Gina, and the time spent sponsoring competitions that bring my thoughts to life, many hugs, Charlotte
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