Pine Needles Drift Down

pine needles drift down

like snowflakes in a ballet

     ... empty birds nest falls






30/10/2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 10:24 AM
Congratulations on your very well deserved win in Russell's "Autumn Splendor" contest Francine. Love, Carol
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September 17, 2012 at 7:06 AM
FRANCINE Congrats with your win ~SKAT
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September 16, 2012 at 3:20 PM
Nice haiku. Congratulations with the win.
Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 9:55 AM
AGAIN, I LOVE it. And congrats on your win.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 1:04 AM
CONGRATS FRANCINE ON A GLORIOUS WRITE AND WIN FOR THIS BEAUTIFUL ENTRY .. ALSO THANKXX SO MUCH FOR HONORING MY POEM IN YOUR CONTEST .. AM SO HONORED TO BE RECOGNIZED AS A WINNER LUV ..
A   Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 11:44 PM
Francine.. congratulations with your awesome imagery in Russell Sivey's " Autumn Splendor " beautiful contest. Always nice to support all contest when possible~ Good night :-* PD
Johnson Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 2:03 PM
Congratulations Francine. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 9:04 PM
wow, this is gorgeous, Francine!!
Brown Avatar
November 1, 2011 at 6:26 AM
Tis the first of November and the day is starting out beautiful. The poetry I am reading this morning is very diverse and should make my whole day enjoyable as I read it. Your hearts are overflowing onto your paper and makes such amazing reading. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Francine. Love, Carol
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October 31, 2011 at 6:46 PM
Lovely one Francine....hope you've entered this gem!
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October 31, 2011 at 5:08 PM
A perfect "strict haiku," Francine. Love the images of the needs, snow and the empty nest. Hope you entered this in Charles' haiku contest and wish you success! Love, Carolyn
Roberts Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 5:31 PM
its not, I have a different one entered which was entered befor I wrote this
Horne Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 1:31 PM
Lovely haiku, Francine - I'm just beginning to get the hang of this form! Thanks very much -I had great fun with your contest
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