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Pills For Thrills

Oh, you beautiful little pill,
how will you relieve my ill?
With naked fairies to amuse my eyes
or aided money to fill my bills?

Oh, but wait! Before I do anything,
let's first try out the pill.
One will do for a little swing
and there goes the funny thrill.

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Beata Agustin

October 30, 2024 at 8:22 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

February 24, 2016 at 3:41 PM

Jason Kim, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

January 3, 2016 at 7:02 PM

Happy New Year's

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

September 3, 2015 at 9:28 AM

Jason, nice lil poem.. I see this your first poem here in Soup! I've been here two years now. Welcome here! Lots of fun with great people!!!blessings!~oLive Eloisa

Poet Destroyer A

September 2, 2015 at 11:52 PM

Hi Jason, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

September 1, 2015 at 11:17 PM

Jason, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT