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Pillows of Patience

I n v i s i b l e threads, a mystical m i r a g e, binding the silhouette of the sky to the skin of cinnamon sequels in the deep blue chakra that sees beyond illusive clouds, carrying rainbow roses and thornless buds quenched with jasmine rain. Yet I remain engrossed in the rising haze from cornea rivers, facing the sun amidst silenced stones, counting unwept diamonds that ebb and flow through the pool of peace lilies, and violet vapors, veiled in violin breeze, ricocheting like the h e a t of throbbing heartbeats… Remember, I taste the sundrops you feel in solitude, I’ve been listening to your e y e s ~ stories spun from luminous lies, pain streaming behind saffron smiles, unrolling polaroids of angst through the lens of life, while the gossamer gold of gloaming mirrors the poem between your sore sighs, like dilating daisies in the heart of the midnight iris… And through your pupils, I’ve found the reason to rhyme~ bleeding pleas of love with whimsical words, dusted with periwinkle, glazed with crystals, amidst the gusts of grief cloaking your conscience, when wintry woes suffocate your cashmere spirit. But I still am an origami enigma, sleepwalking in silence, aching to reach the chandelier cinders flickering above~ pillows of patience… This I write not to the crestfallen Luna, but to the galaxies twirling as moon-tulips above lashes dusted with liquid lilac, as I am a misplaced metaphor, etched with empathy, kohl tears on petals, pricking fragile fingers, like thistles of time… I feel beyond what I breathe and I see hidden hues, for in my eyes~ there is no need for poetic phrases when soul is tied to the strings of immortal blossoms in your garden of pristine petunias l a c e d with unbreakable vows…

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Date: 3/3/2025 3:45:00 PM
Pragmatic self preservation Poetess, expressed with oracular flair. "I feel beyond what I breathe and I see hidden hues...An origami enigma sleep walking in silence." Very original and thought provoking poetry...J.A.B.
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Date: 2/23/2025 7:54:00 PM
Each time I read your poems, I am filled with wonder and awe. How vast is your poetic horizon. New images and metaphors cling to your poetic firmament like stars and galaxies. "I’ve been listening to your e y e s ~ stories spun from luminous lies, pain streaming behind saffron smiles, unrolling polaroids of angst through the lens of life." Through invisible threads, you are able to see things beyond illusive clouds through the lens of life as one who has experienced the ecstasy and the frustration of love. Love can be a cruel teacher, as it gives a deeper insight into others feelings and makes you see things with greater empathy. Another wonderful poem and it goes into my FAVE.
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Date: 2/23/2025 9:40:00 AM
Impressive use of contrast dear ink, and how your lines stitch themselves together to create a poetic tapestry ... amazing!
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Date: 2/22/2025 8:18:00 PM
a poem like this...I'll just enjoy like a fine wine
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Date: 2/22/2025 9:54:00 AM
This wonderful poem is about emotional and spiritual bonds between people, as well as the inquiry into inner sensations and perspectives, dearest Ink. The imagery generates feelings of longing, compassion, and empathy, implying that you recognize the agony and beauty in others' lives. The subject also covers themes of love, loneliness, and the complex beauty of both joy and grief. The poem's diction is vibrant and expressive, with metaphors and similes used to generate rich images. For example, "invisible threads" and "mystical mirages" imply a deeper link beyond the tangible. Sensory language, such as "taste the sundrops" and "jasmine rain," allows readers to feel the emotions and situations more clearly. Warm embraces and many good vibes
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Date: 2/21/2025 4:00:00 PM
Ahhh so beautiful. And I caught the contest theme in there. Very clever. I think I saw this one was entered for Brian? Maybe not. I will have to recheck that. You are doing really well in most of his contests. His last one got totally past me. They come and go so fast!
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Date: 2/21/2025 2:48:00 PM
IE, I like cornea rivers and other references to tears and eyes...through your pupils etc. In the end, your eyes (view) manifest unbreakable vows. This makes me think about loving and caring and hoping someone will see how we care and see them. On a higher level it could be the universe itself that we desire a relationship with. As I read this, I'm thinking you may be suggesting it's better at the right time to say how we feel directly (outside of poetic phrases). Of course. that exposes us to risk of rejection. I always preferred rejection of something or someone that comes with a bit of kindness and empathy if it should come to that. Smiles and thanks for the opportunity to think about what you've written. It's nebulous enough so that I can go almost anywhere along the read. Really fun!!
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Date: 2/21/2025 10:17:00 AM
Sweet ink….how do you continually come up with such wonderful metaphors….your poetic descriptions are incredible!! Debx
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Date: 2/21/2025 9:30:00 AM
Beautiful. So many metaphors to ingest and enjoy. Delightful read.
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Date: 2/21/2025 9:18:00 AM
Gorgeous. " violin breeze, ricocheting like the h e a t of throbbing heartbeats…"
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Date: 2/21/2025 9:04:00 AM
Wow, otherwordly!
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Date: 2/21/2025 8:03:00 AM
Wow ! Speechless !
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